Lovely two chapters

So far I'm loving it. Hope you post the next chapters soon for I cant stop wondering what will happen to Becky/George and Amelia/Dobbin

This is incredibly entertaining. Please update soon.

you are a truly amazing writer...i love this story it is absolutely riviting...lol...GOOD job...i cant wait for chp3

This was an instense chapter! The sexual tension greatly added to the growing suspence, which urges the reader on. I like George even more in this chapter because you reveal much more of his character and his softer side; he was, and I quote, "creepily sexy" in the first. I'm eager to read more, especially after that dramatic, cliff-hanger ending!

A consuming read! George is such an interesting character and I liked how you got into his head, watching his struggle with his lust for Becky. I totally did not expect this story to end as it did! Thank you very much!