this was a totally different story that I enjoyed reading. thank you.

boring..

Truly beautifully written I must say, and it was such an inspiring story that deserves good reviews . There are no words to describe how much I enjoyed reading this. Please keep up the good work . It was an amazing story and very creative.

Hey, I’m not sure if you’ll see this but I just wanted to say something.
This fic is my favorite, not just for this ship but of all time. I’ve read and reread it so many time over the years, and it still fills me with just as much joy as it did the first time. I can’t help but come back it. At least once a year now, like some sort of tradition, for nearly 8 years. Wow.
And, here I am again, just wanting to let you know that I’m still in love with this fic.

I hope Duke ends up being Serenity's mate, they're one of my favorite Yu-Gi-Oh pairings. Great story so far.

Oh my God. What was that song? I CANT FIND IT! Ugh! I wanna find da pretty moosics!

I loved this story and I loved the ending.

Usually I leave long reviews but I can't find enough words to express how much I loved this story but I will leave a quote here from my fav movie Anastasia

"It's the perfect ending."
"No it's a perfect beginning."

Loved that line. Because to every end there is only a new beginning. Thus there really is no real end. Even in death. And I think that's a really beautiful way to look at the world.

I've read the magazine you mentioned that gives Yami's birthday, but I've recently found out that whoever translated it didn't get his birthday quite right. The original Japanese version says his original birthdate in the manga is 19th of the 3rd month of Harvesting season (Shemu) in the Ancient Egypt calendar, which is roughly converted to July 26 in the Gregorian Calendar. The translator probably thought it wouldn't be an issue just to use March as the '3rd month', but the Egyptians divided the year differently than we do, and so the English translation of Yami's birthday is a little off. He's actually a Leo

awesome story i really like it you should think about doing a squeal to it

wonderful ending 3 glad to see I was right about it being Mahado

Good job on this story. I liked it when you added syrus, chazz, and of course jaden. I was sqealing when I heard the song because it reminded me of thumbelina.

So, I have mixed feelings
Whilst I think the plot of the story is great and you've executed it's ideas really well and stuff, plus you have really little vocabulary mistakes, I find that sometimes you over-describe scenes/characters/thoughts waaaaay too much. Sometimes it can get a little boring reading about how someone looks for a quarter of a chapter, you know? Besides that, I think everything Is quite well written, and you've fit the plot idea to the characters well, I will continue reading

That was so good. I mean the part of when Yami returning home and surprising everyone and then his mother ALMOST fainted that was truly incridible and amazingly hilarious as well! ahahah!
That must be my favorite part of the chapter of all!
Thank you!

I don't think I've ever cried so much reading a fanfiction ;-; Anyway you did an amazing job on the story. -

That story was amazing! Forgive the lame phrasing when I say it was an emotional rollercoaster. Parts had me crying in sadness, crying in happiness, wanting to scream in frustration at the characters, laugh... Well, you get it. Your writing is powerful!

It was extremely well written, and one day, I hope you DO manage to publish it as an original story. Damn, I wish there was a sequel. I also loved the different creatures you came up with, very creative, I especially liked the tricksters.

The only criticism I can find is to check spelling, and maybe to double check that facts match up with what you've said in eatlier chapters, for some parts. That's pretty much it. Absolutely brilliant!