Please continue with this amazing story. I feel like so much more can be written. You're a fantastic writer and I'd really love to read more of your work (especially more Chloe-Derek fan fiction).

It was really cute! Exactly how Kelly Armstrong would have portrayed it. Bravo! Hope to see more from you.

This was absolutely awesome.

I really wish you would continue it, because I feel like this should be continued. It has the potential to be continued. However, I don't want to hassle you about it.

Just know, this was a wonderful, sad, suspenseful, sweet story.

I know that you cann't think of anything else to add...but as soon as you can think of anything for a next chapter please do!SO PLEASE CONTINUE THIS CHAPTER!

Really really good. The perfect amount of suspense, horror, thrill, sappiness... Really extremely well done.

OMGG OMGG OMGG , Rather quick paced && Beautiful Piece Of Work Deariee :) iLyk The Endinq (8

This was written so well and had a really good plot to it. It was an amazing one shot, I must say! You should write another one or even start a story? It's obvious you're naturally talented when it comes to writting fanficts for this book series. You should keep it up!

I was so hoping for a kiss. This is amazing. Truly one of the best Ive read.

that was an awesome fic! Please please please write another!

it's awesome! slightly angsty and dark. I LOVE IT! :D

this was really good:) u should write more chlerek stories:)

Great story! Full of suspense and it made me frightened through the whole thing! I love how you actually kept them in character because a lot of people don't do that on fanfiction. You captured Derek's impatience and his need to protect perfectly. And you didn't overkill the romance which I enjoyed.

It seemed somewhat in Character. All the 'creature' talk seemed a bit.. un-Derek-like, but other than that, I think you were fairly in character.

Though, I was impressed by the way Chloe was portrayed. It seemed in character, and very, very realistic. You seemed to have spent some time on this. If not, then it naturally has better quality to it than a lot of the other clutter-ful fanfics out there.

Congrats.

This was worth reading.

i love the tension in this story. I agree that actions speak louder than words but, sometimes it is nice for the words to be said.

your story was very well written. i've noticed that most ff writers who try to create chloe/derek danger situations tend to do so, well badly, using out of context dialogue and bad grammer. most just have bad writing skills in general. yours on the other hand was absolutely excellent, it is quite obvious you are a writer.