I just finished reading this story in one sitting. I really enjoyed it!

Brilliant!

I liked this story

I think the dating part was my favorite if the whole story.
Sweet story, I enjoyed it.

I love this story so much. I've read it three times now and never get tired of it.

I felt he kissed her a bit prematurely but overall the other parts of the story were solid for me. It's just more of a preference for things to go slow. However, I trust your story. definitely intriguing.

I think this has to be the funniest, most romantic Jasper - Bella story that I have read so far! You made me laugh, cry, and wish for a cold shower and not necessarily in that order lol... love it, love, it!

BRAVO! BRAVO! *Clapping* I loved your story and am glad to see it turn out so well!

aww i love this story

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omg loved this. I was scared you'd have him cheating or drama with groupies. So glad you didn't. Great story

I loved it... I cryed when I finished it... I wanted them to have alot of kids but I guess this is it... Waaaahhh :')... Happy tears... Best ever

I got teary eyed in this epilogue mainly because it hit me that my daughter will not be able to experience the sweet protectiveness of her father... we'r re separated continents apart.
Anyway... good story! Congratulations!

Loved this story. Excellent writing ... A good amount of drama, but not too much. I love how you saw it through all the way to grandchildren! I love when stories are completely wrapped up like that!

I like the name definitely unique. I also loved the way you played the pregnancy. I hate when you have to suffer through chapters and chapters of pregnancy when nothing in the plot is really happening. Thank God for epidurals though. I agree with you. After all the pain that needle was nothing.