Wow this is pretty interesting i hope to see a 3rd chapter with a little bit longer and a bit more detail but otherwise i'm interested. Midna became evil which is kind of something I've always wanted to see i love Midna shes awesome i hope you update soon.

Noooooooo! You HAVE to come back to this! You cant have Link die on Midna like that!

This story can't be over, can it? Such a cliffhanger! D:! You have to finish this!

Tarrible!

It was horrible!

Link can't die!

NO! Link is dead? pft! if that were true this would be under tragedy.

I must ask, do you have a plan for this? Because this, so far, seems like a true fanfic wanna be one-shot. If you do have a plan, then I take that back! This could very well be a great story, if thought through correctly. Please keep that in mind as you continue the journey.

You seemed to try a little too hard on the quality of the chapter, like you wanted to get too much out at once. In future chapters, try to refrain from doing this, as tempting as it may be. And the line "more pure and powerful than anything the three divine Goddesses' could have ever witnessed" I'm afraid is a no-go. That is simply impossible.

I truelly, and honestly, can't wait for the next chapter! 'Till next time!

The Sage of Water,

~ConGie

hehe...hehe...funny )

that was really good! yah, i really like it. keep writing :)

1. I am first and foremost a LinkxMidna fan, but I won't whine about the ending beyond this.

2. This story was very well thought out, despite several distracting errors with grammer, word choice, etc.

3. I totally agree that Link is a tragic hero, and I am glad to have a fic that empathizes that.

4. Very well done. All I can really say in conclusion is: amazing.

How nice. Fantastic.

Must say this has been the best new story I've read in a while. Please continue I want to know what happened.

Oh gosh... cliffhanger... XD Can't wait until you write more!

No! Don't kill Link. :O

wow i don't no y i look at this kind of story all i do is cry im sad now 5/5 my man