Wait a minute. Oh I get it nowww...ew Leon ew xD

This was hot! Great job! We need more LeonxSheva!

This was another good story! Though it was a one shot it was pretty hot! I like how you described her shivering when he touched her belly, I'm a guy who loooooves a girls belly button & I know that its a sensitive area.

Also, though an unusual pairing, its easier to imagine than Wesker & Sheva all though that wasn't exactly willingly but somehow this doesn't seem as much like a rape situation it seems like a fighting turning into hostile sex sorta deal.

Sheva taking it anally would hut like a bitch if she was getting it raw like that it takes a lot of preparation & even more foreplay to build up to that nonetheless I think Sheva is the hottest Rez Even character (Lol I like black girls over white girls any day) and her accent makes her that much sexier.

So it'd be cool if you ever did do a lemon involving Sheva & some other male character where they did also have anal maybe in like a later chapter because women can enjoy it if done right and frankly I don't think I read enough lemons to indulge in that sort of thing. Plus she's probably go the the biggest butt out of anyone in the game. :P

But it'd be good to see that and in the context of it actually being enjoyable for her or maybe uncomfortable at first as is a lot of woman their 1st time but then more & more enjoyable.

Kinda like how you seem to describe Sheva how she's resistant but then the pain turns to pleasure.

Also one last thing I noticed the brief implication of Chris & Sheva in Monster and its too bad Chris died but I'd like to see you write a Creva if you could. I hope you consider my ideas and I liked this story t was a good one shot, but a bit of a weird ending I don't think I'd want to see that kind of threesome between the three of them! lol

This was a really good story, I liked it I bet you could do a good lemon with just about any RE characters but hopefully next time it will be more romantic but still hot not just entirely lust filled :P

Nice job i enjoyed the read :)

Okay so I'm new to fan fiction so, I can't post anything until 2 days from now but I really liked your story. I liked how you kept the characters the same but added another twist to it. Overall I liked your story and plz post when your gonna write another.

Also, when I post my fic can you review it because I was also gonna make a LeonSheva fic. I would love to get an review frim you since yours was really good. Thanks.

Peace o

Hahaha Threesome! xD That was awesome and sexy :P

Hmm, not bad for a pair like this.

) This was hott.

Crack pair FTW! D

Love this~

Best crack pair ever. ) Leon was a bit different in this one but this is a fanfiction and none the less it was a damn good written one. I give you kudos for the unique plot and character use as well as remaining in character, even for a bit. The lemon was flawless and overall an enjoyable story. )

Orugh. I sent a lengthy critique earlier and wasn't logged in. Sorry about that. Firefox has failed me for the last tim-Oh, who am I kidding, I'll keep using it.

Anyway, I hope you got it.

wow! really interesting

Well, this was certainly something! D Loved it!

*sigh* Okay, This has to be the BEST crack pairing fic of Leon and Sheva eva! XD

Leon x Sheva, eh? Nice! D

This is a little different but good nonetheless. I enjoyed what I have read. Nice job!