I have only one word. AMAZING

please continue

interesting

oh please oh please hurry and update

i just wanted to say i love this story !

Are thinking of adding more chapters cuz that would be amazing.

have a nice day

awesome story please udpate soon.

please update soon!

was a bit confused as i thought the deceps were on the moon then, when you had the pet come into it i assumed not. love the idea though, and especially that you had soundwave talking normally like he did in the comics, keep going.

Ah will you continue? This is really enjoyable story so i hope you will update soon :)

It's an interesting idea. I would like to read more.

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CDW

I know I said so earlier, but I really meant what I said about the quotation marks. This is a good story, I don't deny it, and wouldn't have alerted it otherwise. But when you have dialogue in the story, you really do need to have quotation marks there to divide it. Sometimes, it is hard to tell where the dialogue ends and the action is. For both chapters. It was fine for chapter one earlier, but now, it is as difficult to read as chapter two.

I'm really enjoying this story. On more of a critique-style note, the lack of parenthesis and apostrophes in spots makes it difficult to follow the story flow. Looking into getting a beta reader might not be a bad idea (betas are always good to have, I'm currently looking for a beta myself as my usual beta reader isn't much into critiquing TF fiction) to help catch some of those things. You can find some readers right here on the site, too, to make things easier for you on that front.

Again, I'm enjoying the story greatly and looking forward to the next part. (And if you do have issues getting a beta reader, I'm available to act in that manner for a bit at least.)

Good continuance, but your quotation marks are missing from the areas of dialogue, making it hard to read.

Ah i want to see more, it's interesting story so far. Please update!

So far so good, i want more! Please more! :D