This is so cute! I love it. Awesome job on writing this.

Wow this is a good start.

Very good.

*scratching head*

How did I miss this when you posted it?

It's beautiful and really liked how you told the story through Eric's eyes.

Fantastic!

very sweet...great writing :)

I really like this view of what may have happened.

Well it's a wise decision that you continue to write because you're good. I like this story because it is simple and yet moving. Good job.

I'm loving your story already! I sure hope you continue!

well now- there's the missing information! Thanks for sharing your talent- I'm in if you're writing more! :)

You did GOOD! I think Eric cares more for Sookie than he's ever cared about any mortal since being turning. I think it's something that's been unsettling to him for a long time, but I also think, as of this last book, that he's accepted it...stopped fighting it. It's not logical or pragmatic, but it's there and he can't deny it anymore. I always love stories from Eric's point of view. I wish the books could do that sometimes.

Nice job. :)

Good story, with a really good explaination for where he was and why Eric did not come and save Sookie.

Since we have to wait until book 10 to find out where Eric was and what he was doing, it's great to see all these conjectures by fellow fans. This was a nice one. Thanks.

Very nice, will you continue?

Wonderful! Great story, beautifully written. Thank you for sharing this with us - please write more!

This was a wonderful piece of writing! I think it's intelligent and I like your word choices. It's descriptive, romantic, and true to the SVM canon. Write some more!