PLEASE MAKE A SECOND PART TO THIS I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS OMG IM OBSESSED WITH THIS PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER PART THAT STARTS OFF THE DAY AFTER

This story DESERVES a sequel! But I guess you haven't written in a WHILE... So I guess it won't happen but that's a pity because your an amazing writer

THIS WAS AWESOME DO ANOTHER STORY YOUR WRITING SKILLS ARE EXCELLENT YOU SHOULD WITE A BOOK

the was a great one shoot. It definitely has the working to be made into a bigger story.

wow... what an amazing naley elevator ride! (love how he remembered who she was!) :)

Amazing story. Totally sexy with brilliant ending. I hope that you are planning sequel.

gotta tell ya, i am quite lost as to how the hell he figured out who she was, might have been a good paragraph to add in there someplace after the clothes back on and him whispering in her ear, other than that i absolutely loved it. but it makes you wonder what clicked to make him remember her name. would love to know what happens next! lol

LOVED IT xoxo Mrs Naley Scott

This could SO use a sequel ;)

that was hot. Hope there is a sequel.

wow

that was a great story i wish there would have been more but oh well

How did Nathan know her name. would have liked to seen Haley's face when Nathan said

“I’ll see you at the same time tomorrow.” Nathan said huskily, before leaning in closer to her ear. “Haley James.”

I love this story! I think it's great your writing a sequel! Can't wait to read more of your work :)

Okay so i totally loved it was funny and really good written.

So all i can say is plz write a sequel where they talk about how he remembers her!plz!plzplz

loved it! are you going to continu this? i hope so, it's amazing, good job (just like you other stories btw)

Charlotte

it was a nice story may less f words would nice but it was great it would me nice to see how he happened to remember her name and what the do next and how come she sucks him and he doesn't return the favor only using his hands, its hands, mouth and then penis, but it was a good story