ahhh sweet

beautiful and sad and so well written. loved it

I love this! Well written.

WOW. That was powerful. I could feel Scotty's love in every gesture. You made me feel this is what really happened. That's is how wonderful your fan fic is. Great job.

Amazing story! I really enjoyed it! Perfect!

Aww, sweet. Not sure I want to see the episode though, we haven't had the final four episodes of the season in the UK yet.

Seshh.

I think I should stop reading post-ep one shots for episodes I haven't watched yet - it's kind of horrible. I don't know the episode - I have no idea how Lil ended up on the river bank, why Scotty's cell phone is the reason for everything bad and where does the episode actually end and where does your imagination begin... But I'll wait. And search for a list of the episodes for season 6... But maybe I shouldn't do that eiter. Waiting is hard!

Sorry for changing topics, but... Did I get it right from your profile that CBS is thinking of cancelling Lil and Scotty? They wouldn't do that - would they? That would be so horrible! At least one season more... I'll beg with you.

Okay. I noticed some lapses in the tenses used in the story. I don't know wether it was meant to be that way or not but if I started to interprete them I'd say that you managed to show Scotty's horror and missing feeling of time because he's so shocked and afraid to lose Lil. Am I right? Never mind. I have this habit or trying to interprete every text I'm reading - some stupid school habit. Sorry. I might be completely wrong there.

And I like your image of "afterworld". It's like Ghost Whisperer, which I started watching recently - "You have to step into the light" or something like that. German translations suck. And if I could interprete some more - "It's raining" - I guess it's raining because Scotty is crying, is it? Okay, I said I'd stop doing this *gg* I'd better do so.

Oh interesting!

Thank goodness we are onoy a few weeks behind you now coz U can't wait to find out just what happened in this epiosde that gave yiou this story!

Thanks for writting it!

hey, great new story, i like it

I realize I have NO idea what happened in the episode, but that isn't gonna stop me reading. I'm totally cool with spoilers!

Now I'll read, anyway...

I loved this. I currently have no clue why she's there or what happened or anything (which kinda sucks). Not sure I even want to know, because it seems sad, and I'm really not good with cliffhangers. And the episodes seemed to have stopped being shown over here for a while, at least season six episodes. Damn!

I'm gonna have to go watch the episode now, aren't I? Sorry if this review didn't make much sense. Bottom line is, I really liked the story. :)

Ah, awesome one shot! I was just wanting for someone to write something after the cliffhanger the other night! Now we can just wait and see and hope that this is what happens! ;)

OMG...amazing...they just have to get to her so we can have another season.

I absolutely loved this. I was hoping someone was gonna write something regarding the episode. Great job!

LOVE it! That was perfect. So emotional and beautiful...

I'm teary eyed- thank God I'm home and not at school, lol. I hope something like this turns out.

Okay, this may be really random, but I was thinking (while washing the dishes last night) that what if it wasn't related to the case? What if it was icky Frankie seeking revenge for her rejection (thinking said rejection was because Scotty had found companionship somewhere else i.e. Lilly) and she decided to off Lil to get back at Scotty. Just a weird and convoluted thought. Hmm, maybe I'll have to write a story too. ;)

Thanks so much for this fic! I really needed it! :D

Love it! I so love this one! Gotta write one of my own as soon as I can. Love the end too :P:P We'll see what happens next Sunday :?