Hum... I do wish this were a bit longer, but it was enjoyable, nonetheless.

I like the darker characterizations you hint at behind the characters - specifically, Neji. The leather strings were a good touch.

Erm, I do believe you mean "perspiration", not "expiration", but other than that, your writing is essentially flawless.

aw! you didnt really leave the time for us to process the different emotions. im not sure though, if that was the point, to make us kinda roller coaster from amusement to death and sadness, to happyness and teasing. either way, good job!

Loved the angst! Very nicely portrayed. XD

Awww, I loved this!

I was happy that Neji kissed her I thought this would end without some fluff!

Amazing story.

I loved it!

This was an awesome story) i LOVVEE neji saku stories thank you so much!

I like this...it's good!

And the red string thing was awesome...

Are you going to write a sequel?

Wow, cute! Sad that Kuma died; he was pretty cool...

I liked the red leather threads; it was a very good idea. I can see Neji doing something like that :]

The ending was a bit brief, but it fit the story quite well :D

LixxyChan xx

Well I was surprised by the pairing again although even though it is different, you wrote it really good and i think from this shot of yours and the last shot this pairing might be growing on me like a side pairing :P

Great shot (Y)