awsome

This is just gorgeous! Please do continue to write Thaluke! ;) You're very talented!

Very well -written, but I wish there was another chapter ! :)? P.s. wonderful job on sightless and With the Light in Our Eyes! (those are also amazing stories which I would love to have another chapter for ;) hint hint :P )
I adore the way you write Thalia and Luke, its filled with so much emotion and wit. Great, GREAT job! :)

Hey, just wanted to say beautifully written story!

I love it! It's quite melancholy, but I think it's appropriate :Pr

Wow this was seriously really good. I really enjoyed the story line. :)

Oh, I just have one question, really. Would you please, please, PLEASE write more of these awesome Luke/Thalia oneshots?

I liked the way you described everything in detail.

It was well-written. But no offense, I didn't like the bad words, and the story lines don't fit that of the real story by Rick.

I still liked it though

Very well written. A fascinating take on Luke's past, AU or not. I loved the meeting between him and Thalia. You have a very powerful way of writing, and your Luke is very much real.

I will be looking into your other works.

-Sorrow

I've tried reading Sightless, but it was just so fantastic I stopped halfway through the first chapter in anger with myself. I was literally tearing-you both have -talent-. I'm totally revisiting sightless now.

-Pandaskis xoxo

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Cheers

i like that 'They still have never applied to anyone but her.'

Oh. My. Gods.

I honestly can't tell you how much I loved this. Because it is ... -ness.

I mean, honestly, when I read this I could almost picture it in my head - the vividness of emotion, the description, that undercurrent of loneliness...

"The next afternoon, he burns the Bible she had given him."

You have rendered me speechless yet again.

Brilliance.

(About time I reviewed, really.)

aw poor luke :( :( :( this makes me wanna cry for him but its so sad and so cute, loved it :)

*sobs*

That's awful. Awful awful awful.

Not the writing, of course; I think you know what I'm talking about.

But...kind of made me smile at the end there.

And I laughed a little at 'stepfascist'. Haha...