Reviews for Melting Confusion |
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Sigh-Ah chapter 1 . 6/7/2013 never thought Seras and walter would make such a cute couple lmao! awesome! FAV. |
Onekimikoneko447 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013 O.O I have exactly three words to describe this fanfic and here they are EPIC, STEAMY,AND OMFGALUCARDWALTERANDSERASURA GENIUS! I hope many more amazing stories such as this follows have a nice day |
kitten chapter 1 . 8/5/2011 Woa... 3 some! ;3 me give 4 stars! |
Ryuketsu no Hana chapter 1 . 6/24/2011 me encanto :3 |
Mystookami chapter 1 . 2/2/2011 That was... Interesting... I loved it though! Awesome story! |
Irean Vamprate chapter 1 . 7/10/2010 very errotic, very original:) but dont be embarrassed to get into it a little more its very sexy |
CraigTucker1252 chapter 1 . 10/26/2009 hm,...i have 2 say:):) thiz is a very good story hahahah just kidding! its thee BEST!:):P:P:P |
SinsofMidnight chapter 1 . 9/21/2009 Woot! I love that the entire idea came from Sir Integra! Who woulda thought she read yaoi? XD Fabulously written! |
XavierFox chapter 1 . 7/15/2009 For the most part this was a wonderful story, but the only thing that I saw wrong with it was that it moved way to fast. It would have been much better if you had drawn it out a little more and add a little more detail and then you shall have a very interesting oneshot. |
DarkLillyOfTheNight96 chapter 1 . 5/31/2009 That was in a way sweet ~Lilly~ |
Faithless.Honour chapter 1 . 5/22/2009 is there going to be anymore on this? like a one shot sequel? please say there is |
swartzvald chapter 1 . 5/13/2009 Humor? |
bahleeeted chapter 1 . 5/7/2009 yay, WxS! _ There's not enough of us in the world. :D I have several lemony WxS fics upon my profile if you're in the mood to read some once your school year is over. Threesomes are hot too! Nice story, if a bit hard to follow... you have a good grasp on grammar and punctuation, but your phrasing is a bit awkward and it's hard to tell who's doing what to whom and how. As one example, when Walter "pierced" Seras, I immediately thought of him having fangs and biting her. A word like penetrated or entered would have made it a lot clearer. |
Silvete chapter 1 . 5/6/2009 Omg omg omg! So hot. I knew alucard would want her to0o! hmm Alucard so hot. |