Reviews for Melting Confusion
Sigh-Ah chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
never thought Seras and walter would make such a cute couple lmao! awesome! FAV.
Onekimikoneko447 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
O.O I have exactly three words to describe this fanfic and here they are EPIC, STEAMY,AND OMFGALUCARDWALTERANDSERASURA GENIUS! I hope many more amazing stories such as this follows have a nice day
kitten chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Woa... 3 some! ;3 me give 4 stars!
Ryuketsu no Hana chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
me encanto :3
Mystookami chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
That was... Interesting... I loved it though! Awesome story!
Irean Vamprate chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
very errotic, very original:) but dont be embarrassed to get into it a little more its very sexy
CraigTucker1252 chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
hm,...i have 2 say:):)

thiz is a very good story

hahahah just kidding!

its thee BEST!:):P:P:P
SinsofMidnight chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Woot! I love that the entire idea came from Sir Integra! Who woulda thought she read yaoi? XD

Fabulously written!
XavierFox chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
For the most part this was a wonderful story, but the only thing that I saw wrong with it was that it moved way to fast. It would have been much better if you had drawn it out a little more and add a little more detail and then you shall have a very interesting oneshot.
DarkLillyOfTheNight96 chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
That was in a way sweet

~Lilly~
Faithless.Honour chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
is there going to be anymore on this? like a one shot sequel? please say there is
swartzvald chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
Humor?
bahleeeted chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
yay, WxS! _ There's not enough of us in the world. :D I have several lemony WxS fics upon my profile if you're in the mood to read some once your school year is over. Threesomes are hot too!

Nice story, if a bit hard to follow... you have a good grasp on grammar and punctuation, but your phrasing is a bit awkward and it's hard to tell who's doing what to whom and how. As one example, when Walter "pierced" Seras, I immediately thought of him having fangs and biting her. A word like penetrated or entered would have made it a lot clearer.
Silvete chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Omg omg omg! So hot. I knew alucard would want her to0o! hmm Alucard so hot.