Reviews for Silence
Shinobi scribe of the kage chapter 38 . 12/29/2017
does anyone know when this story will be updated because there aint no justice with it just sitting around
DreamFeathers chapter 38 . 9/7/2017
in a way, i'm intrigued to find out who else will be in Camp Dolores other than Beach, Gambit and Callisto. And why haven't those two brick heads tried to connect with their own cellmates?! I mean come on. You'd want to at least what powers and possible skills assets you'd be dealing with in case of possible break out or riot.
... ohhh... and if i recall correctly, there was also a secondary imprisonment camp somewhere besides the arctic one. That's a LOT of angry mutant firepower.

In any case, I do hope that you haven't completely abandoned this story, even if RL is a bitch. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this one and hope to hear more from you. :)
DreamFeathers chapter 37 . 9/7/2017
*tun dun dunnnnnnn* So Loki is having his fingers deeper in the pie than I thought. Yes, called it since the first mention of "green eyed guy". I just didn't realize that first mention of causing havoc as diversion would carry this far. The only question is, what is his ulterior motive other than random chaos with the Mutant Registration and Legacy Virus?
(You can rearrange four letters only so many ways :P )
DreamFeathers chapter 34 . 9/7/2017
*lip quivers and wipes eyes* Damnit, you really have a way to make a grown woman cry... And make me rooting for mutants even more. *crying eyes out for the cruel mutant persecution*
By the by, did you ever decide on which era or time frame you set this story? I'm kinda getting the 90's vibe or the end of 80s from the setting with the X-Men.
DreamFeathers chapter 32 . 9/6/2017
*sob* That scene with the forced mutant registration and Lifeline in Seatle... *CRY*
DreamFeathers chapter 31 . 9/6/2017
"Nooo! Not the banana!" *dies from laughter, several times*
You really do excel with cliffhangers.
DreamFeathers chapter 29 . 9/6/2017
This story really has everything. I don't have to be familiar with GI Joe-verse to get feeling of distinct personalities of each of the characters. You've managed to meld the two worlds together pretty well, while we of course wave away the regular logic flaws of "why wouldn't these organisations had met before or gotten involved to the mutant questions before". It is after all a Marvel / GI Joe cross-over and thus excused (although you've worked around it really well). :)
All in all, I do enjoy hugely reading your writing. There's intense action scenes that literally leaves me gnawing my thumb from suspense, truly intriguing philosophical and psychological that gets me nodding along, thinking "yeah, I can see that working, interesting POV". And lets not forget brilliant humor that has me laughing out loud in the middle of the night while reading this story.
The text itself is brilliantly solid and I don't think I've noticed much typos or grammar slips. If I sometimes notice something, I just simply chalk it under the fact that I might have a different way of phrasing something (finglish). The way you've divided the chapter into smaller scene sections is also really good. It gives the reader the option for "just a little bit more, just this scene", and also it serves as a really good bookmark to find where I left my reading.
DreamFeathers chapter 23 . 9/5/2017
*dies from too much laughter* That prank war was pure gold! *dies again*
DreamFeathers chapter 21 . 9/4/2017
*dies from laughter at Gambit and Beach Head duking it out*
DreamFeathers chapter 20 . 9/4/2017
*rests chin to arms and swings legs excitedly as reads*
I really do like Sinister's hypothesis about the twins. You really make their shared mind meld an interesting read and I can't wait to see how it plays out.
DreamFeathers chapter 15 . 9/4/2017
*first gnaws knuckles from suspense and then cracks up* Aww! Deadpool is back!
DreamFeathers chapter 12 . 9/3/2017
Okay, so I just re-watched the first GI Joe movie and after flipping through some fanart I accidentally ran into this story. And all I gotta say... *BITES KNUCKLES* This stuff is INTENSE! I know the Marvel universe but not a slick about GI beyond the two movies, but your writing makes it really easy to just slip in and enjoy your good storytelling.
I noticed that the status of this story is still ongoing, but it's been a few years since you updated it. Based on what i've read this far, i really do hope that you don't give up on this :)
cheryl.leggans chapter 37 . 5/12/2017
I love this story but it's not finished. Can we get chapter 39 soon. Thank you
ahsoka1996 chapter 38 . 7/6/2016
Are you going to update soon?
Bronwyn Celtia chapter 38 . 7/4/2016
That's it. I am not reading ANYTHING else not marked "COMPLETE". I've been reading this one for HOURS and now...

Oh well, at least you brought my beloved Hawk back to the land of the living before you left off...
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