Awesome Great Story.I love Chris and Bianca happy ending.

Es una versión alternativa bastante emotiva e interesante. Siendo sincera, es una de las mejores que he leído en mucho tiempo. Me hubiera gustado un poco más de detalles con Leo y Piper al final, pero es una historia increíble. Gracias.
PDT: Un saludo desde Colombia.

I'd have rathered you didn't 'honor' her place but i can ignore that part of the ending. The rest of the story was great, thank you

piper irritates me. Sorry but she's been angry and rude and frustrated the entire story. She blames it all on not wanting to believed her son is evil but still, that's 14 chapters so far of her selfish rudeness. And now when Leo tells her Chris needs space, what does she do? Get her spoiled way AGAIN and get sent to interrupt him. and then he has to leave his most calming place the bridge just because she can't handle the height when she wasn't even invited in the first place! Piper just irritates me

was Chris raped?

I hope there's no bianca in this story. For one because there's no tag or mention of her in the summary (misleading) but also cause I just really dont like her

I'm Glad It Worked Out AND I'm Glad That He Has Bianca. She Is His Canon Love After All

Poor Chris. This Is Actually A Pretty Good Chris Revelation Story

I loove this story! :D (And Bianca/Chris too! Thanks you for gave them an happy ending even if you don't like this couple!)

THANKS FOR A GREAT STORY I REALLY LIKED READING IT

Very nice. I love a happy ending, and I'm glad you threw some angst in there between Leo and Chris. Stories that have him forgiving the man after one apology are totally unrealistic. I'm also glad Bianca only had a guest role in the very last scene - I'm really not a Bianca fan. While the dark bits were horrible - I don't think I've wanted to see a clan of demons vanquished more - they gave the story depth. And I liked that they kept their memories. To me, it wouldn't have made sense if the Charmed Ones remembered, but the time travellers didn't.

All in all, I quite liked it. A well-written, very enjoyable story. :)

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One of THE best stories I've ever read i love its great good job :)

AWE! That was sweet and beautiful and I loved it.

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I Loved the Story even if it was a little AU D