Reviews for The Line
Nahau Moondust chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
Go Ziva, but sometimes I think Tony need to mind his own business.
CSI4lyfNCIS13 chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
'mouth wide open' still open. now giggling uncontrolably i have no idea why. nice, very nice.
pinkbananasmoothie chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
i love ncis and i could totally see this happening for real!

awesome awesome awesome so awesome you should send it to the writers with a note saying "just give us tiva ALREADY!"
Di-Bee chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Hi there! I was passing by your profile, and noticed we shared the same ships. and immediately jumped on the first fic i've seen of the front page...; related to an episode I haven't seen already. But anyway... I really liked the story (must like it even more once I would have seen the epi, but the last of ncis epi,I'm going to see them in summer holydays, cause I don't have time enough lately. But that's not what my review is about

I really liked the way you described the relationship. I mean, the kinda explosive, but.; love thing

Thanks for sharing it there!

Greetings.

DiBee
Js chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
:O now, i knew you were a good writer but this is just flipping awesome even if it is about NCIS.

i'd quite like to see you write a book to be fair, it would be a very good read:]

Js. xx
Allie Black chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Oh yay D i actually love these two, you've FINALLY convinced me. Its all great, especially the last bit. Tres effective mon amie. You paint tension and chemistry across the page here. (i tried to be too artistic there didnt i! ohh well...haha)Its a natural piece of crafty artiness. YOU, my dear, are the awesomefull one) and yes i will write another story, just for you. muhahahaha D x
zatl chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
I loved the ending.
stardustedmelodies chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
I-I think my heart just melted. More, more, more, please!
That Cripple Girl chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Ooh Tiva i love it :-D
Viktorija chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
I love Legend and I love this fic!
Frogster chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
Lovely! Hoping there's more Tiva to come next week...
cleverdistraction chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
O.M.F.G. SO GOOD. Seriously, this was a fantastic piece-especially after watching Legend-and I love the tightly wound emotion that you're able to infuse in this. It's really...perfect. Like, I can't even describe it any other way. I especially love the last 5 lines-it was just short, sweet, and amazingly fitting. Great job!
Lady Arreya chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Great story! :) I loved "Legend, part 1" too! I can't wait to see the rest of the last few eps of this season... looks like there's going to be lots of TIVA.

Thanks for sharing! :)
TheYoungTimpani chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Oh so awesome. I did not see that coming. Very nice.
Harleyzgirl chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
If you even try to tell me that that is all there is I will start firing paper spit balls at you DiNozzo style. Where's the rest? You absolutely CAN NOT end it there!
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