oh how i miss this story. i really hope you update it again sometime soon.

This is really good. Can't wait for what's next:) I'm having a fun time just reading it.

this is freaking awesome please finish this fic pms

Oh wow!

...Wow wow wow! What an amazing story! Only 9 chapters in and I'm obsessed. Ok honestly, I was hooked by chapter 1, but I digress.

I absolutely love this story, and I really hope you don't abandon it because it's so great. I love how you wrote Spencer, it's very fresh and original. And I like how you make her so strong at times, but really she's just can be so weak. Anyway, I hope you update soon :)

UPDATE SOON!

Keep it up! I really like it! As a former mental patient (I just got out for the second time on Friday), I can appreciate the environment. If you ever have any questions about psychiatric hospitals, then just PM me.

cany wait until next chapter

great job. update soon

I finally got some free time and read through this again... I have to admit I was a little worried because Spencer is such a strong character and it seems like it'd be hard to just drop into the mindset needed to write her after a break but you handled it like you never stopped writing and it came across perfectly.

The reason the internal dialogue works so well in this story is that even though it's neurotic and funny, it doesn't seem affected. It totally comes across as realistic for the character you've created and if you dig a little deeper it's kind of heartbreaking because it shows how damaged Spencer really is.

I think that's why I'm OK with the relationship when normally this kind of pairing kind of squicks me out, Spencer is as messed up as those kids are. Really the only difference is she's a little older and has figured out a survival strategy a little better than them. When she was 17 she was in the same place as them, literally. That's one of the things I love about this, not Spencer being messed up but how you've shown how normal her life was before she was outted and the reaction of her family and how everything just kind of snowballed from there. It makes me think about really how tenuous our own mostly ordered lives are.

Anyway I should probably end this before this gets too long and rambling to be readable, sometimes I hate the way this site works, but once again thanks for writing this amazing story and I hope you keep writing. It's funny and awesome, yes, but it's also deep and moving under that surface and I can't wait to see where you take it.

Holy fucking shit man,

I love this story so much you have no idea, when i started reading it i was like oh no, not another story with someone tlaking to themselves like a retard... but then i realized that you do it in a 'non-annoying way' I love this so much you have no idea, I realy fucking lvoe spencer in this story like crazy, you amde her seem so fucking hot and like idk crazy spencer is fucking hot xD

and wow the aprts with her and Ashley are so cute like seriously, i really do hope you continue this it's amazing Oh man i can't wait to see what happens next. I'm really looking forward to it. Lmfao I really love the goldfish part. it's great.

good work !

-Rachel

love it love it love.

continue. pls.

I probably won't get around to reading this for a while because I'm ridiculously behind on stories and with ones I really like and there's been a gap but the author is promising to finish I want to read the whole thing again so I get the full, um, awesomeness or whatever. Yah, I know, first world problems. Oh you poor baby, too many good stories to read? Boo hoo. So anyway, yeah, even if I can't leave real feedback I wanted to say that I'm totally looking forward to this, I seriously 3 your Spencer and the environment you've created.

I'm glad you are back. I was wondering about this story. It is still so good.

bah! so happy you updated and refuse to abandon this story. so good and agh i love it. great writing hope it continues

This is such an intriguing story I can't seem to tear myself away from it. I hope to see more soon!