Bella jumping back and forth between terror and mischief towards Edward is a bit hard to follow, but it certainly makes for a wide variety of encounters.

Or, uh, maybe it was a good call

Ah yes, because announcing your presence to anyone connected to the threads cannot be a mistake

The thought of Bella being petrified with terror at the sight of the little pixie-girl who just wants to be her friend made me laugh

This Edward is the same with Stefanie's, but your Bella is better, Addy and Will are all Yours and very intersting.

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Let me tell this story is a lot of fun

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I liked this Bella a lot, she is amazing

Great spin on the original, thanks for sharing

Damn. To be a teenager with insecurities again. Instead I would be wanting the creep who stalks me at night to go away. Go figure

I'm so glad this one is finished. I've been waiting a while for it to be completed. I wish my friend had told be of your new chapters back then I would have come back to finish sooner. I look forward to finding and reading the rest of the series whenever it happens to be posted.

Fabulous story, I loved all their powers and the unique twist you gave twilight. Thanks for writing and sharing!

Great story.

Great chapter. So glad that Abby found her nich

Boy am I glad I’m reading this as a completed story so I don’t have to wait 2 weeks. I love how Bella was able to defend herself!

Poor Bella.