really like this hope you come back to it

Ahh! This is the most perfect, best VA story I have ever read! You have done such a fantastic job with everything! I know you haven't updated in a really long time but PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS STORY! I LOVE it so much! Especially I the Dimitri and Rose romance! Please remember that it is never to late to continue this story and that a lot of people (me especially) would absolutely love it if you finished! So I say again please please please continue this story! Though I should say that even if you don't finish it you are still an amazing writer so please don't let that go to waste!

Did you abandon this story

It would be absolutely awesome if you picked this story up again, seeing as it is an absolutely awesome story! You've already put so much effort into it! I love how much drama there is, yet it still has great storyline. And you've written the characters pretty accurately! Please continue

Ya...that's totally what rose Hathaway would do! Just allow the man she loves to take another for a test drive and just wait on the side lines till he decided which car he wanted to buy. I fucking hated this chapter...dimitris been dating Tasha...WHILE rose was in a coma and up until now but the second he wants to get it on with rose rose has no problem with that? Oh hell no...Rose should have made him sweat...he would deserve it since that's what hes been doing to her for 2 months. Hes been a complete asshole...rose has really been through some shit and hes been with Tasha...to bad rose couldn't have hooked up with Adrian during that time...eye for an eye and all that. Lets even this shit out with alittle Adrian lovin...yup I like that idea. Adrian never faltered...Adrian was always there...Adrian gave a fuck and also acted on it...adrians the man for rose in this story theres no god damn doubt about it. So rose run to adrians room now! he'll make you feel good *wink*

you really had me on board...I like how rose doesn't constantly pine over dimitri that she realizes that there is more to her life then him...most stories shes like "nothing " without him and it makes me fuckin pissed! I hate pathetic,weak,whiny,victim love me or i'll die rose...fucking hate her ...but anyway like I said you had me until this pregnancy...first off it was rape second it was a stirgio...shouldn't the first thing out of her mouth after she found out been...make me a appointment for a abortion. I can not believe that you didn't even have her consider it...what the hell? its a mother fucking demon! kill the thing...

Hope you decide to start updating this again!

that was good keep it up

Update soon :)

OMG ! YOU SAVED MASON IN SPOKANE JUST TO KILL HIM OFF ANYWAE ! WHY IS EHT ALWAES MASON ! WHY COULDNT EHT BE EDDIE ? HES NOWHERE NEAR AS IMPORTANT ! GOODDDDDDDD I AM SO PHUCKIN PISSED OFF RIGHT NOW ! YOU SUCK ATM ! GRRRRRR

Okay! Hurry up and make chapter 29! I am hooked on your story. i NEED to know what happens.

However, as a writer and a fan, you should put more Dimitri in this chapter. Have him watch her for the fist five-ten minutes, then come over to Rose and say some really sweet and romantic things to her. You have to remind Rose why she loves and wants Dimitri.

IDEAS: Have Dimitri, himself, bring a single rose to Rose's dorm, just as she was about to leave (her, Lissa and Christian wanted to eat before the dance). Dimitri is mesmerized by Rose's beaty and he ends up coming in and they make out again or whatever you think

Another idea: Dimitri has a rose sent up to her iwth a note attachd to it. Sweet and romantic. Have Dimitri hold Rose's hand when the lights dim and a slow song comes on. Have Rose say to a specific song that this song reminds her of him "save a horse, ride a cowboy" for instance (him and his western novels)

If you need more ideas I am so open! i love your story and CANNOT wait to read the next chapter

Whoa! That was a freaking scary dream. Well written, htough. I hope Rose is okay. I felt it was weird that Adrian didnt say anything and right off the bat, I knew something was wrong.

I hope that dizziness isn't cuased by Alex. I think it is. Along with the migraines.

Dude! *drools all over the computer* that was freaking HOTT! you so should NOT have stopped there! A-mazing! fantastic! Scense like the one towards the end with Dimtiri is seriosly HOTT! Keep that up!

THis was by far one of my favorite chapters. Well written, and very dramatic. However, there were a few sentances that I had to reread to understand what you meant, but I got it. A job very well done! Be proud of yourself

FEWH! i was beginning you forgot about the amazingly hot Russian guy named Dimitri Belikov! And the fight with Mason is definately going to be epic