OMG! I dont care what u say, ur awesome! I like the way u write, it was SO sweet. I like Zexion & Naminé together. A LOT more than her and Roxas. Great job! U r a HECK of a lot better than I am!

Good luck with your career in or out of writing!

i LOVE what you did with this pairing! i know its short and so do you but, for a short fanfic, it was good. try increasing it a bit more with this whole story. and if you cant try getting ideas from other stories but make sure to put down that you are only using it for ideas and it belongs to its rightful owner.

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oops im sorry, you might not even want to do this, BUT if you do...(look up)

I hope i have made you a happy person and helped you with more stories in the future.

Just missed. I love that. I'm a bit sick of those "happy ending love stories." You fit this nicely around the Kingdom Hearts universe and despite it's length, it says something real. I'm sick of things that aren't real. A thousand pages of an unrealistic love story can not match one word of something with a taste of that real melancholy feeling. In summary, I liked it. :D