| Reviews for Mud Pies |
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   Munkeyfump20 chapter 7 . 11/16/2017 Thanks for the very good read |
| Spitfire303 chapter 7 . 2/13/2015 that is brilliant :-D if your still doing these um... pills, lanyard and blazer :-P see what you can come up with ae? |
| Spitfire303 chapter 6 . 2/13/2015 cute |
| lalez chapter 7 . 9/5/2009 i had a good laugh while reading these and i have three words for you beer, pretzel and dirndl (or short Oktoberfest) keep going |
| lil smiles chapter 7 . 6/18/2009 ROFL! Jello banter *SHOULD* be a genre all on its own, which you nailed by the way :D Octopus, Lisbon, is so mighty tasty XD More please! |
| LoveandWinning chapter 7 . 6/18/2009 haha...wow...chicken and octopus...nice. More please! |
| JelloFanatic123 chapter 7 . 6/18/2009 Thats so typical of Jane to do! I love this chapter! |
| demonbunny7 chapter 7 . 6/18/2009 Ha ha, loved that. Especially the end :D That was so cool. Very well done and all with speech. How much of a battle did you have with yourself not to go into their heads ;) Loved it *"Us cheerleaders loved it too. Watch us do backflips."* |
| PhoenixWytch chapter 7 . 6/18/2009 Cute! I like. Thanks for writing. I look forward to reading more. |
| mwalter1 chapter 7 . 6/18/2009 Great dialog! I wouldn't eat octopus either... |
| superwoman1015 chapter 7 . 6/18/2009 Oh I love it! Hilarious. I've always wanted to do something like this, but my need for description gets in the way, oh well. This was great though. Made me laugh. And the last line, well lines "You got chicken?" "Yes." "And you like octopus?" "Uh-huh." "Then why did you get chicken." "Because- I knew you couldn't read French. Wanna switch?" My favorite. Seriously made me laugh, I got weird looks form my son. Great chapter. |
| JocelynMcC chapter 7 . 6/18/2009 I remember the story you talked about. I liked it, too. And I liked this one as well. :) xxJo -.-.-.- jisbon dot freeforums dot org - Join us! |
| OnlySoAnHour chapter 7 . 6/18/2009 That was so funny with the chicken/octopus thing :P Here are three words for ya!: Polaroid, headphones, and fingerprints :D Keep up the great writing! |
| JocelynMcC chapter 6 . 6/11/2009 That was so hilarious and romantic. Kind of a strange mix, ha? :) But truly wonderful. You must have some imagination! *g* xxJo -.-.-.-.- jisbon dot freeforums dot org |
| superwoman1015 chapter 6 . 6/10/2009 Heaven had better TV, loved it. Very well done. it threw me in the beginning, I was like, wait this is supposed to be the let go one, but then I got it. I loved this. I really did. I like this ending better than the one in the show, and the ear grab was very Lisbon. Loved it! |
