Regarding the previous chapter...Reading old fics and loving them. I absolutely love how you handled the goodbye here.

Reread two years later and it's still just as good! Thanks

Only thing I can say ... Loved it! Thanks

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Great story! :D

I loved it. It was so beautifully written I didn't mind the occasional errors. Jenn was great outside her shell.

Such a fun chapter to end the story on. I loved how Sheppard called them on what they were doing, teasing without teasing, so to speak. Another story for the favorites list. :)

"Been grown up long, Lieutenant?"

"Jenny and Ronon sitting in a tree. . ."

"K-I-S-S-I-N-G. . . ." And the fact that it was Lorne finishing the song was absolutely hilarious!

I so loved Jennifer's words in this chapter! So wise, so profound. Great writing!

Yay! He's back. But there's so much to deal with now that his friends betrayed him.

Another thing I liked about htis chapter was all the guys putting two and two together about the girls kissing them. Especially seeing Rodney and Lorne figure it out. And then Sheppard. Great work.

Great chapter with the girls. I loved how Marie was yelling at Laura for not feeling her "girlie side." Great characterization, but man! I really feel for Jenn, and I know what the episode has coming!

Wow! I'm really glad you decided todig deeper into the characters. It really paid off!

I so feel for Jennifer right now. Ronon, to an extent. He feels obligated to his people. But Jenn is really getting the short end of the stick, here.

Great chapter. Great writing!

So heartbreaking! I feel for Jen. She finally realizes what's going on, and he leaves. So not fair!

So sad that Carson isn't around anymore! I feel so sorry for Laura.

Great chapter. Love the relationship between the women and how Laura's making the rounds, catching up with everyone.

The "non-injured kind of careful." Wonderful line! And the scene with Lorne and Marie, I feel sorry for Jen the most! LOL.

Another great chapter