Loved it

Angst first, salvation next. I thought for sure both Lois and Clark were going to stay away from each other for a while. Thank goodness for Jimmy Olsen! He's the catalyst that brought them together. Such a Clois pimper, he is. I love his presence in this story and I guess, most of your other stories as well. Great job!

"Two parts bitter, one part tired..."

ANd

"Cheesy and chik-flicky..."

Great Lines!

nice story I love clois

Nice Job! Beautiful Clois! Why oh why can't they freaking admit that they love each other already! I loved what you did having Jimmy knock some sense into Clark! GO CLOIS! Nice Job and Long Live Clois! :)

This was completely stunning. Not what I was expecting at all and I loved it. You blew me away with this. It was so perfect and just...wow. I am looking forward to reading more from you. ]

NICE! A perfect Clois story! Great JOB!

Please continue making more, LOVED the story! :)

Another amazing story! I always look forward to them, as I said, you always have amazing Clois, but that you include Jimmy is always icing on the cake :D

Great way to incorporate all the best characters of the season. I love how you have Jimmy giving Clark advice. I like how you had him come to her and tell her how he really feels. Their reunion before she moved into the farmhouse was great. I really like how excited Jimmy was to see Lois in the last paragraph.

good story

That was so nice to read. It's different, not wordy or drawn out like normal - very pointed. LOL, and I loved Jimmy pretty much telling Clark to get over it and go get Lois. :)

Guh. I so love your one-shots. The first halves hit me really hard and break my heart, and the second halves mend them. I love your writing style, too, the succinctness really adds to the impact. This was beautifully done. Thank you.