A great story. Very well written.

it didnt suck i promise :) it made me giggle!

i just read this "son of a nutcracker" and i love it. I'm actualy loling

I love you story

it was reay good

i realy want you to do a nother chapter saying what happend on sat.

i know its been some time since you wrote this but i just wanted to let you know that your story did not "suck" it was definately different from some of the others, this is true, but it was good to get away from all the "smut" stories that are on here. oh, by the way, i am a huge star wars fan and i burst out laughing, in the middle of computer class, when emmet said "luke, i am your father." loved it

that was hilarious! omg that was good

ar u kidding? i luved it!

XD OMFG! I LURVES IT! XD especially the "they see me mowin, my front lawn" XD XD

Actually, the Bottom half was an absolute crack up. Don't worry though, I know the feeling of complete embarrassment when you think your chapter/story is completely wack!

Lines that i loved:

"I ALREADY TOLD YOU, JASPER! I DON'T EAT BACON BITS! NOW GIVE ME THE DAMN HUMMUS!"

"NO! IT'S THOSE VOICES AGAIN! WHY CAN'T THEY JUST LEAVE ME ALONE?"

He he Emmett and Jazzy are crack ups. Peace out,

~Paige~

OMG that was hilarious!

ok that was really funny, i liked the part with emmett and jasper especially the darth vader voice, that was ahlarious reply back if you get this

thx

HAHAHAHAHAHA. That was honestly great. Super funny! Loved it!

AWSOME! It was so funny! You're a great writer!

Loved it! Awesome story

Wow-

Forget the fact that I have read this ten times and saved it in my email, I still crack up when I read it. Great job- I really think this has the potential to win.

Email or PM me!

-VegitarianxVampire