Reviews for The Unlucky Guy
korixkuma chapter 1 . 7/6/2017
Okay, i did NOT see that comming. Beautiful!
TheCandyChild chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
OKIOIWEOIERWJOIEWOIWEROOWRE- *falls to floor clutching heart* CALL THE FANBULANCE!
TheMistOfThePast chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
OMG THATS SO SO SO SO CUTE!
GrilledPeanutButter chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
you should do another chapter...
KenRik chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Well, that was so sweet! :D But... the fact that Alphonse doesn't have his body back yet and Edward's establishing a future with Winry already is quite bothersome. But other than that, well done! :D
Anna Elric chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
OMG. I did not see that coming! Well done.
Blissfully Disturbed chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
MAN! YOU TOTALLY ROCK! I've never read that kind of fanfics like yours ever. You're one of the most talented writers I've read so far keep it up! If only you post more FMA fanfics, then I can "relate" more. HAHA. Though, I do watch Gundam Seed but FMA is more "close" to me... So far, you're my FAVORITE writer. (yep, I'll put ya on my profie but maybe I'll find another "new" one someday. SOMEDAY P)
translaxia chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
OMG!1 SUPER GD! PLS MAKE MORE! I LOVE THIS IT WAS SUPER GD!
AlienKitty chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
Aw! That was too fluffy! Loved it!
FreyaLin chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
aw i love that idea! that was so cute! u HAVE TO MAKE ANOTHER ONE! XD kya~ love the story! i wanna see Winry go n tell ed yes~! pwease?
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
i went, "wah! oh my gosh! that was so darn cute! we!"

seriously...

i mean it...

hahahahahaha...

no other words can express what i felt when i read that last part...hahahahahaha!

"who's the unlucky guy?"

yeah, i'll consider him very unlucky for planning to get married with the girl he loves and loves him back...yeah, really *unlucky*...

i mean, he even had to let her dissect his automail just to propose to her...that's a drag on his part and on his mechanic-fiancee...hehehehe...

very amusing and sweet! i genuinely adore this story!
bumblebums chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
that was a smart way to make ed propose to winry
And So I Thought chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
I can't believe this is a one-shot! I hate you! Good story though. :)
detosem chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
Really cute i loved it that would be the perfect way for ed to propose to winry :)
ArAshiMitArAshi chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
cute
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