this is really good as fuck, I MEAN IT EVEN IF I GOT TO MEET THE MOTHER OF ALL FUCKING SHIT, I SWEAR.

Gaara? Emotional. A real turn off for me. He wasn't stuttering and all that nonsense when him and naruto had their battle? I would assume he does not care for his father, or hate him. I don't think he would suddenly get tears in his eyes. That's some serious BS.

Awesome! This is a sick ass crossover I can't wait to read the rest:D

Well, I hope everything will be better for you soon! You're a pretty good author, so it'll be a waste if you decided to give it up.

This was a really interesting story, nonetheless.

Hello, i just wanted to point out a mistake I saw. i assume tht you copy and pasted this chapter cause I saw double of the same paragraphs after a while.

Right here:

"Shut up, we're here." Gaara growled, as they all arrived to the entrance of the non-ninja village. They were escorted in by the samurai there and came across the seated area of the five Kage, who all entered after they did.

It the went back to here:

"WE HEARD THAT!" Ichigo turned to the two and an eyebrow rose. Then, he interrupted their current plotting of different ways of making the "despicable dog-boy suffer in ways man-kind had yet to know" with the very question that ran through the heads of all the Shinigami there except Minato.

and continued until the end. Just wanted you to know so you could fix it. I got confused for a min when I got to that point.

Besides that, I really enjoyed reading this. I can't wait til the next chapter.

This is a rather intresting story... and it's pretty funny too... Good Job!

Love Gaara in this story

Please update soon! This story ish awesome!

Drinking Buddy? Ha ha ha ha ha ha hah ah ah ah ha ha ha hah hah ha ha ha ha ha ah ah ha ha ha ha aha ah aha ha! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Awesome, this is the greatest cross over ever!

I feel your pain. But on a different subject chocolate is good for the brain.

*Cute chibi* Updatu Onegai! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Everything was okay until

a) way too much information spilled by a first meeting by Toshiro. That's way too much OOC even for him.

B) eww for rape. Like I said before, I don't think that's info you'd divulge so easily.

yeayy!

you update!

i want MORE!

*LaVenDaR*

A lot better than i thougt it would be