You should write more of this its cute and funny. I never actually knew Edrear couldn't read so hey something I actually wanted to learn.

I am SO SORRY! I meant to put DON'T stop writing, not stop writing!
My Apologies,
Black Kat

I love it! I laughed at a lot of it! your a really descriptive writer! You have a great imagination! stop writing!

Walla Walla Washington! That was hilarious. One edit that I'd make since it made the story kind of confusing is that, at the end you mix up Edaniel and Edrear and basically have Edrear interrupt himself

wow that's funny, well the secod chapter was. I loed how they all reacted! I'd try and lengthen your chapters a little if i were you. but otherwise i love the concept! thanks for the litle known facts thing! oh and i was wondering if i may steal your "holly hooded angel" thing, i liked it :) if not that's ok too. keep writing, i want to see how this turns out!

Five in bold was a bit annoying. Six and seven seem very good.

PLEASE KEEP UP YOUR WRITING DON'T FORGET TO UPDATE-

Awesome. :)

AWESOME! NEW CHAPTER NOW!

I totally can't wait to read the next chapter! Please update soon!

:3