This story does not say it’s “complete” so are you going to write more?

Great story! Maria is such a good mother to Bianca and Nico.

I highly enjoyed this backstory

Awww i liked this…

How heartwarming...It's like a part Rick Riordan cut out when Nico found out about his past about his mother through an Iris-Message.

Sad

Aw!

I like it. It's got a unique brush to it, and the dialogue in some parts is really brilliant and touching. The theme is rather promising, though it would be better, if you added more description. Otherwise, good job!

awesome post again and again soon

I think that Nico and Bianca were so young when they lost their mom, that they didn't talk as much as they have now. They didn't remember her, remember? Also, you pressed return every sentence. It is also almost only dialogue. This could use more detail. Maybe spread it out across 2 or 3 chapters.

That was so sad!

I really liked it though-you made it seem so real-just like in the books!(Glares at nothing-Mummbles-Damn i wonder what Nico will say...)

Alright, now that you're not churing out all those fics in chat format, I can give you CC instead of flames.

It was good, I like Nico's mother. But there wasn't a lot of description. You need your descriptioon to keep your dialogue flowing, or it will leave the readers with more questions than asnwers.

Other than that, good. Keep it up.

Nicely written, interesting theme. I liked reading it.