Reviews for Once Upon a Time
King Vader 66 chapter 1 . 4/22/2019
Why does this give me an Edward Scissorhands vibe
Guest chapter 4 . 5/16/2017
Ffffffuck cliff hangers
the kid chapter 20 . 7/8/2014
I really wanna see these to realize that they're each other... can't he overhear them talking, or maybe get a flashback about Mish-lean? He has to be curious about a person who broke out in tears for no obvious reason in front of the mess hall, right? Also, now that we're talking about le stuff, why would Jen go back to Crystal Lake at all if she saw a killer, and TOLD PEOPLE ABOUT HIM? Alright, we'll just assume that the she's-so-dead girl doesn't believe her, and goes back to embarrass her "friend."

For that matter, which Jason is this? He's obviously an AU one, but is he (in general) more remake Jason or Part 2-Part 3 Jason? I personally find remake Jason to be more attractive due to his tenacity in hunting down stupid teenagers and his near god-like powers when it comes to Crystal Lake. Is he not there yet? He is young after all. Maybe have a chapter of him tinkering with stuff in the mine to show the development of his abilities later? :D
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 12 . 11/21/2013
im in love with ur story :3 and wish for more chapters cant wait and I so love jason 3 so keep up work oh yeah friday the 13 is my so yeah keep up the good work
DinahDeath chapter 20 . 10/24/2013
I hope you update as soon as you can, the story is wonderful!
Barbossa'sGirl3 chapter 18 . 9/17/2013
Great story. :) Kane is also my favorite Jason.
Dance Elle Dance chapter 20 . 5/28/2013
Loving this! Haha. Can't wait to read more!
DarthShepherdDog chapter 20 . 5/28/2013
Can't wait for another chapter. Please continue with the story D: I love it!
FAYZIAN15 chapter 20 . 5/19/2013
Could you pretty pretty please update? I love it!
breannapierson1990 chapter 20 . 5/4/2013
please don't stop i want to know if she ever gets back together with jason and what happens latter on in the book
vishous21 chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
awesome
Foxtroter chapter 20 . 3/24/2013
HURRY BGRKU#GI#UGIGWOIRGFUIUIPW
twilove chapter 20 . 2/24/2013
whens the next chapter?
nadillaandlaprasthefireandice chapter 20 . 2/14/2013
I love it! Keep it up!
blackdarklight chapter 19 . 2/13/2013
Ive have been reading this fanfic and I have to say, I 3 it
You have given Jason a personalty that works ( some fanfics try this and to me some don't cut it)
I adore the pairing of Jen&Jason, so sweet and real.
Hope the next chapter is up soon, keep up the good work
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