Interesting story. Sad that it's not being updated :(

God damn what a chapter ending.

I like this Kyuubi. And I like your writing!

Well, I said the 'hint of backstory' thing was kinda fun, but now it's really meh. I really wanna know just what exactly happened, you know, with Madara (or Obito...It's probably Obito) now being mentioned as common knowledge. I'm pretty damn curious as to how the Akatsuki reacted to this strange 'sacrifice Naruto to appease the Kyubi' thing and that leads me to wondering just how the rest of the story began. It could go a lot of different ways and I'm burning with curiosity about which one you chose.

Great start. Love the whole 'a touch of backstory, here and there' thing. It's hella frustrating when you want the whole picture, but it really makes the story flow nicely.

awesome more please

"...we just call it Hell."

Hah, Anko would say something like that. I wonder if it ate the other two demons...

Fisrt fic I've read that it's kind of graphic and yet I don't feel repulsive at all by it. It took me by surprise, but actually I like it, the way Nine tail demon was portrayed and the people's natural reactions to it was great. Hope you keep going because it's really interesting and the writing style it's high quality... As in there is actual background on the locations and places and plot. Short, to the point and good.

Interesting story. I liked the concept even if was flawed. It would have fit far better in any of the other villages, but Konoha is too kindhearted to have allowed all that to happen. I can't see Minato truly "sacrificing" Naruto or others in such a way.

Years abandoned at this point so unlikely the author will even see this, but damn, what an intriguing premise! And damn you for not finishing it! This isn't the sort of story someone else can pick up or be inspired to write their own version of. This is unique, it's only in this one story by this one author and its abandonment means it will never be complete.
Damn, that sucks.

This,,, is not what I expected when I thought about reading this... And I must say it is indeed very interesting. Sometimes hard for me to swallow but at the same time Ifind myself wanting just alittle bit more.

This is so dark and so awesome and so...gasp...

Excellent story, and very original.

This is a very interesting concept. Very unique. It is really well done. You make all the characters seem real and tehir reactions are spot on too. I did wonder why Minato was saying he doomed a village and then I realized he gave the KYUBI to them. Needless to say I was not very surprised to find out what happened to the village hidden in the clouds. I like how you made it a konoha operation I also like the concept of the village hidden in the surf. Keep it up.

god damn this is the most interesting thing ive read in months. show me what ya got left!