Wow, that was so beautiful!

That's was great

Liked it. Nice and fluffy, well done

This was very good. I liked it.

Wow. Simply amazing.

~Eclipse-Vamp :)

So do not spare Mah Soarez to tell the story! I was really traveling hours and hours about how you describe the first of the two. You really should do a sequel! The fic was perfect, I really loved.

Simply amazing! I had a entire range of emotions going on while I read this.

*misty eyes* each tale is more emotional, more intense... your Alice's uncertainty and Jasper fear of losing her... wow. I really love this tale...

This is a fantastic story! Thanks so much for writing it.

Poor Alice, but I understan her worries. Really cute o/s! D

this one was great! it figures that Alice would be very insecure about her body and all that. i see Maria as a scary, evil version of Alice. it makes sense that she would compare herself.

Really enjoyed this story. I love reading about Alice and Jasper's time before the Cullens. I would guess that she had insecurities about Jasper's past and Maria.

Great Job!

This was good. I've never thought about it before but I suppose you're right. Maria probably would weigh heavily on Alice's mind. But Alice and Jasper are the perfect couple and I'm glad that you didn't let that awful Maria drive a wedge in their relationship. Great story!

You did great with Jasper and Alice here ... I like that Alice is the one who has to deal with her complex feelings for a change, as she's usually the assured one. I've seen a similar take on Maria and Jasper's relationship in a couple of fanfics, and it makes a lot of sense to me.

Beautiful. Touching. Hm... yep, that pretty much sums up this one shot. I loved it, thanks for sharing.