This chapter worked pretty well, I think, though I'm going to have to reread a couple bits of previous chapters to fit everything together in my head again.

Konata summed up her situation really well.

And the wedding was back in 2017, man, this story has been going for a long time.

Just reread everything to catch up, and I noticed some mistakes with names in chapter 2.

Really loving the story so far, you're the last Konami writer left in this site (or at least the last one that writes in English), so I hope this story develops it to the fullest, specially after the good job you did with KonoSetsu.

You're good at writing cute moments between all these couples, and yeah Miyueki sounds better, let's see what you can do with them.

that went well

They are together officially, I thought the old man would be angry.

I really don't think too many would mind ..if any at all.. that KonoSetsu took up such a huge chunk of the chapter, but I mean, obviously got no complaints from me here
Loving Eva and the beginning of development on AsuAya on the side too

quite good

Whoo! So happy this story is being updated again
Okay, well aside from chapter 13 where Tsukasa referred to Konata as Kono-chan rather than Kona-chan on more than one occasion, I'd say most other things are pretty minor.
That being said, your story is shaping up to be absolutely beautiful and I'm enjoying it immensely. The only qualm I seem to have is the one that will have me curling up into a ball in the corner as I sulk and try to figure out how to not mind the seemingly very possible MiyukixYue ship... xD
..but no, really, I'm gonna have to figure that out.. o.o

you did well

Eva is crazy as hell and POOR SETSUNA! AHHHHHHHHHHHH!

poor setsuna and konotas being trained by eva is quite entertaining

i think you did good

quite interactions between the characters is what i like in your fic especially between konata and kagami

Setsuna grow up.

quite good