Well that was completely illogical of Christine.

I think Ashley is a little overdone as a villain. Way too comical. And Christine wasn’t illogical to run away as soon as she’d seen another dead man in her husbands lab. I wouldn’t have “talked it out”. Otherwise I love this version of Nadir. I’ve read lots of different Nasir’s, but not a jealous over Christine one. Love this story!

I seriously love this so much.

Brilliant job. I usually am not fond of stories that start with E/C already having history and all that, but I loved this one. In CH. 8 how Erik finds out Christine loves him and all she can say is "Am I in trouble?" It was perfectly executed. I am the glad the story ended with a happy ending.

I also loved the semi plot-twist. Erik never had a dead body in the room, and the guy who he killed was actually a villain. I love redemptive a Erik.

Thank you.

Would Erik have been out shopping for a replacement the next day, if Jack had killed Christine?

(snorts in amusement)
LOVE their reactions...

I am tired of reviewing in english because l am not that great at it and, I read on your bio that you live in spain so I'm going to write in spanish:
Qué historia más maravillosa has escrito, me ha encantado la forma en que has escrito a Erik. A veces es un poco difícil mantener la esencia de Erik y su personalidad cuando es un modern fic, pero tú sí que supiste como mantenerlo. Mientras leía tu fic no pude evitar recordar esta parte del musical: "this haunted face holds no horror for me now, it's in your soul that the true distortion lies" ya que aquí el menor de los problemas de Erik es su rostro sino ese temperamento que tiene.
Disculpa si es un poco confuso lo que he escrito arriba, pero estoy harta de no poderme expresar bien al dejar reviews por mi pobre vocabulario en inglés!
Muchísimas gracias por escribir y compartir tan maravillosa historia!.

Doe-like, hmm?
Definitely Emmy Rossum!

So, is it Sarah Brightman or Emmy Rossum playing the part of Christine in this story?

(grinning evilly)
Wow, Erik, obsessive much?

(smirking slightly)
Let me guess...
Erik found Christine and entered the apartment while she was asleep, took her wedding ring out of her hand and placed on her finger (where it belongs), and covered her up with that blanket, didn't he?

It's de Chagny, not De Chagny...

Please update. Love this story!

ha ha, Evelyn is such a little scientist. Cause and effect...uh oh. Soooo much like Erik! And love h ow he speaks no baby talk to her. And she loves it and her daddy!

Oh my, Christine found out why Erik had not wanted her to stand in the fireplace when they first moved in...a KEY? Loved that Erik called his daughter a hoyden. Love that word.

Sooooo, Nadir is going home to find himself an Iran version of Christine hu? Hope he does, he deserves love. And Raoul and Angela are getting married...and SHE is going to sing? I hope the favors they give out are earplugs!

Glad Meg and her mom made up...as well as they could.

Oh darn...Christine ruined Erik for murder and mayhem...you poor baby. ha ha. Can't kill anymore now without having feelings of guilt. ha ha.

And wow...Erik what did you do to Ashley? While we highly congratulate you on your brain washing skills, you could have inculcated some manners in her. the wretched cow. ha ha. Nice that he enlisted the help of Christine's old shrink.

LOVED the description of the 'fireworks' Erik put on as he blew up his lab and all the potential of every getting the full truth out of him! ha ha.

Of course she is happy, she has an Erik and an Evelyn and who could ever ask for more. Well...I suppose I could ask for more...MORE STORIES FROM YOU! Nice job, Excellent work!

Erik if you refuse to do anything for your wife in the physical sense, then DON"T tempt her so much!

Oh Erik you big sneak! Hiring the MAID who is really the Nanny just waiting for her to give in like that? VERY sneaky of you!

But hey, it got you your fun time! And six weeks to the very hour...and not a minute too soon! you are so funny Erik.

Yep, a nanny has its advantages!

LOVED the whole singing thing and then that Rombauer guy accosting her. Oh Erik, you made me laugh so hard with your "LET ME KILL HIM" thing. As if she would ever say yes.

And her way of defusing the situation was priceless, with the breast pads and telling he couldn't play with him since they had no idea where he has been! Right, germs are the worst!