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A chapter 1 . 11/2/2012 That was cute and funny! I hope you update soon. |
G chapter 1 . 11/2/2012 It's nice to see a fanfic about GiGi. BUT, I noticed you mixed up the words he and she a lot. It's normal to make one or two typos but you seemed to have a lot. I also felt you could add more thoughts & descriptions to make the story more "real" and a little less flat :) Keep writing!1 |
sen whitefox mako red demon chapter 1 . 2/23/2012 jiji yeah |
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 2/22/2012 Sweet. |
Phoenixofdarkness62 chapter 1 . 11/27/2009 Aww that's such a sweet littel story for Kiki and Jiji! It's really nice, and one of the best I've read so far! |
Sirhc Llirrem chapter 1 . 3/24/2009 I think it was funny and entertaing at the same time. Good job. |