WHAT THE HELL? DO YOU PEOPLE ACTUALLY FIND PLEASURE IN WRITING THIS SHIT? WHY CAN'T YOU JUST WRITE ABOUT A LOVE STORY AND NOT A SEX STORY FOR GOD'S SAKE?

I'm sorry, but why does everything have to be so sexualized nowadays? (Sighs)

You've got very good potential. Don't waste it all on sexual garbage...

Very romantic and sensual. I really enjoyed it. Very nice work.

Very well written... a good balance of the emotional notes in the minds of the women counterpointed with an somewhat tasteful erotic description of the physical interactions. I would rate this as a 4.85 out of 5 (keepping with the Olympic feelings of the moment). I would recommend it as reading for a person who was recovering from a fairly heavy emotional trauma... but NOT as a "first thing to read" IMMEDIATELY after such a trauma. Not too "lime-y"... more like a well-balanced lime-aide...

i want to read more

Beautiful, beautiful. I loved it~

*deep breath* AW

oh. it was good. and I don't think it was too lime. you really do an excellent job. *thumps up*