Reviews for Not To Be
RandomFandomsGirl chapter 1 . 8/11/2018
I loved it! but why ?! my heart oh my gosh!
Randomness Girl chapter 1 . 8/30/2016
I told myself I wouldn't cry while reading this.

You had me crying by Haruhi's death.

Gosh darn it. I love you and hate you at the same time.
WHY chapter 1 . 7/17/2016
WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS
Kil99 chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
You're a horrible, amazing person. And yes, you did make me cry. xD
Magykal-guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
I... I... I have no words. Please excuse me while I bury myself in sadness.
Glasglow Hatter chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
OMG the tears are real D';.
I loved the story though,thanks for making it,I really love to torture my feelings x'D.
The Animanga Girl chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
So tragic...
Icy Icee chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
I was unfortunately listening to My Life Would Suck Without You as I read this. I started crying at Mitsukuni's...part...You're a great writer and you really know how to hit people where it hurts.
ToLazyToLogINP chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
THIS...just..THIS! is beautifuly heartbreaking. The reasons each of them werent born just seem to fit perfectly with the character they are. This fic is just so sad. Excuse me, I have to go cry in my corner of woe now.
ggirl chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
This story is amazing

The ability to capture each raw emotion on paper and keeping the characters is focus is just mind blowing

Made me cry such a sad story but beautifully written

i wish 1 had ur writing talent
Evani chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
its really sad, thinking about what people with still-borns must feel, and the fact that nothing can be said to console them. I think the story was really well written, but I really never want to read something like this again, no insult meant
Shining Sunny chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
I listened to Lala's Lullaby from D. gray man as I was reading this.

Horrible mistake.

The combination of the two had me shedding tears like I never before.
BlackWingedTraveler chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Omigod. It has been forever since a fanfiction has made me able to cry, but oh dear god, THIS. So, so sad... The worst for me had to be the twins, because they're my favorite characters and the reason why for them seemed so absolutely fitting, but poor Ranka, crying over his daughter, /not even knowing her gender/... Oh god, I'm sobbing. Sobbing, crying, can't help it.

And Mori, oh my dear god, Mori... "She knew he had been too quiet." That was what started me crying. Oh my dear Mori-sempai, Takashi... So horribly tragic. And Huni-sempai, too small... You made all of their fates fit so well.

And I HATED Kyoya's dad. HATED HIM. I've never hated a character aside from Umbridge in Harry Potter, but he has officially made my hate list. No room for a third child, pah! ...at least now I'm angry, instead of sad, even though I'm still crying... Oh so heartbreaking...

Tamaki. Oh dear Lord Tamaki. His was just... too perfect. Naive idealism of love, the whole "perfect marriage", waiting until afterwards... It fit with his views on life so much, and with that, he was gone. Vanished. He was never a blip on the meter of life.

Without these, the world is a sadder place. Worse. I imagine so many girls, just... deprived. Not knowing what they're missing. Those parents, those poor parents... Perhaps this is just touching me so much because I can empathize with this, because I had a sister that was born stillborn. It just... awful. So sad.

You have a beautiful mastery with words, and I just... Horrible. Sad, horrible, yet so fitting and good.

-can't handle it, bursts into tears once more and flees-
i-Spit-on-Fire chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
that was so sad. but you did a really good job.
xdominoe chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
YOU DIDDDD YOU DID YOU DID YOU DIDDD.

( make me cry , that is . )

so sad and amazing and raw and powerful.

D; i sad now.

~Lily-chan
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