Yay ! That's really cool ! (Sorry if you don't understand me, I'm really bad in english)
I really enjoyed the game, and I thought "but.. After ? About his Time ?" and I "fell" on your fanfiction.
It's well written and I enjoyed read it !

This is such an excellent oneshot! I like this way of looking at the world post game, with Ethan joking around with his friends and just being normal, yet knowing so much that the others have never even thought to consider.

I also like the way that you've introduced it with the grey hair. :)

Okay, you know what? This fic suits the game perfectly-it's adorable.

And I love how everyone's so silly-only Ethan has a right to be more high-strung than Morris at this point.

Love it!

- Lang

Actually, minus the wrinkles, I think Ethan would look pretty darn cool with grey or white hair. But, seriously, this was a fun piece, especially considering the fact that I was at rapt attention despite the fic not really doing anything has got to say something about your writing ability.

LOL.

But actually, compared to the other Hollow Pen users, Ethan didn't use it as much, and to top it off, Sox helped hold back the aging side-effect with those glowy bead things.

Still, a good short fic.

did you like win the game?

I liked this oneshot! Really nice, heh heh! I just finished Time Hollow yesterday (in one and a half day), so why not read some fanfiction?

Thanks! Too bad you didn't write more chapters!

Bye 3

Ethan already has gray hair?

My gosh, it was bad enough when it just stuck up, but now this?

Talk about a bad hair day.

Great job! I really liked this one shot! Poor Ethan. D:

~Hawky Phantom

LOL Nice! I love Time Hollow and I am surprised to see how some people are familiar with it. Good job and I hope you make another Time Hollow story :)

Sincerely,

FE Girl 1