| Reviews for Shattered Surrender |
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  Lamorak Korving chapter 2 . 1/7 I almost feel sorry for Dumbledore, the Order of the Pheonix, and the hypocritical wizarding world, but only almost. They will not find Harry in a forgiving mood any longer. |
 mumphie chapter 15 . 9/15/2019 I would like to see you return to this someday because I's like to see how it will continue. |
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/12/2019 It is a really nice story, i had enjoyed every chapter! Please contiue the writhing! Thanks: Kara |
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/7/2019 draco |
| Mamy 83 chapter 16 . 3/4/2019 Quel dommage qu'il n'y ait pas de suite à cette merveilleuse et originale histoire. Manque de temps d'inspiration ? |
| rowenasheir chapter 16 . 2/8/2019 Will someone please complete this story! |
| mumphie chapter 16 . 12/13/2018 ch.16 - you have woven an interesting story. It has now been eight years. Perhaps real life has gotten easier and could think about coming back to this story to finish it? Perhaps bribing your muse with chocolate? |
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/29/2018 I can't imagine why they would tell harry anything about the protector angle until he's a lot older. He doesn't need to be told anything about the ritual or the protectors, unless he tries to run away and then needs to be told of the need to stay near them as a result of a ritual to save his life. And generally, far too much heavy detail to crush onto a small child who has already endured the unendurable and unforgivable. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/29/2018 You said sirius was rescued after 14 years, however he was imprisoned just after lily & James were killed and Harry is currently eight years old so sirius was in jail for seven years. I can't see harry going anywhere near hogwarts as he's an escaped prisoner and probably half insane and full of vengeance. He would need to stay near his two mentors, both of whom are state enemies, so I see home schooling and training and then unleashing the apocalypse on the dear old bast- i mean headmaster and the rest of the corrupt wizarding world which can put a seven year old in hell on earth. |
| Wolvie26 chapter 16 . 9/9/2018 love it! can't wait to se what happens next! Hope you update soon! |
| TechnoGalen chapter 7 . 5/23/2018 Garbage. |
| TechnoGalen chapter 4 . 5/23/2018 Filler s**t. |
| koseta.a chapter 10 . 5/7/2018 I'm really liking your voldemort not to ooc. He's a bit more sane-ish too |
| TechnoGalen chapter 9 . 4/28/2018 Boring, too much filler bullshit. |
| NateP chapter 16 . 3/5/2018 I re-found this story after a few years and I liked it now, as I did then! Would there be any plans of updating this story? A concept of an agreeable Voldemort and an ugly-evil Dumbledore, wherein Harry and Hermione grow up is a great concept! I'd read any and all new works in a heartbeat! |
