I had to read it twice because it was so nice.

That was amazing and that was your first? Wow great job please read my V/B fanfics im a new author and i would like some friends on here! Anyways great story keep writing!

Short but sweet :)

Oh, a love like theirs and a fic like this need not be explained at all! Nothing needs to be explained! Awww! Sweetest! Ever! BV forever! Great... no, awesome job to you, for a first BV fic? This takes first and last, the cake, and best-author-ever for me! Like you've been writing them forever!

I like this Story. It's simple, short, and sweet. Well done.

WOW! This is your first BV story?! You're pretty amazing author! I loved how detailed everything was, how professional your work is.

Aw. Words not needed! So cute!

O.o Your first B/V? And already this brilliant? Gosh, me jelly. xD

Truly though, very wonderfully written, flawless style, and just so superbly in-character...! I adored every single word in it! Thank you so much for writing this!

Very nice story _

I loved this. I think you did a great job with this. Hope to read more soon!

add explination to what was going on in the beginning

Great, really quite great. Very in character and believable B/V interaction

Very nice and perfect for them

"Fuck you, Vegeta! Fuck you and your fucking pride and all the fucking insecurities that make you a shitty person."

Perfect. I think you nailed them both, and I like Bulma's 'straightening out' at the end.

I think that was perfect. You nailed Vegeta, imo, which is really hard to do when you're writing a romantic scene about a guy who doesn't have a romantic bone in his body lol. Anyways, great story, thanks for writing!