Please come back and finish this, Logan needs his mind Jean free. Marie needs to get better, they need to go after jean and Xavier for what they’ve done.

Ugggggghhhhhhhhh WHY MUST THE GOOD STORIES NOT HAVE RECENT UPDATES uggggghhhhhhhh

Even with it being unfinished I'm still glad I read it. I always love a soft Wolvie caring for Marie story and I think this one showed his devotion so well.

Please keep up the good work! I love this story

This gem needs to be updated. Very, very badly. DO IT!

Wait, wait, wait, wait, WAIT just a fudging minute!

his little sister? He*l nah! That ain't right!

I'd like to highlight a few things:

1) Bobby the B*tch and the kitty cat
-THANK YOU! Finally, someone who shares my hatred for the two!

2) demented, redheaded Jean
-YAS! She REALLY is.

3) he wasn't her daddy
-Yup, you really aren't. That's why you guys should just get together, live forever, and make babies! You two are so perfect for each other!

That's all XD

(Oh yeah, great chapter :3)

I don't suppose there is any chance you'll finish this? its very good :)

This story is fucking amazing, matrioshka style. Though it looks like an epic mammoth wanting to be written, given what has been sketched. I salute your ambitiousness even as I despair at it's chances of getting complete. Please don't give up?

Again, wtf is going On! I'm going ti suffer, ain't I

Wtf is going on! I'm supremely curious. The next chapter calls to me

This was such an ancredible journey, I can't believe there is no more. I know a lot of time has passed but I still hope you'll return to this one someday - perhaps just to give your readers some form of closure? :-) I loved everything about Emma and John in this story. Emma's compassion towards Rogue and patience with Loga;.and the part where she describes what Jean did to take Scott away from her - wow! You managed to elevate my dislike of Jean to a whole new level! The part about suggestion and filter in Logan's mind were brilliantly done, as well as John exasperation with Logan's denail about his feelings for Rogue. You know, I always found in it strange how Logan quickly fell for Jean in the medlab - I mean he must hate the smells there because of his nightmares, yet he suddnely flirts with her like there is no other woman for him. (And the hospital smells must stick to Jean). You've certainly shocked me with your Jean - but it fits with the image of a spoiled rich girl who has vast power. I just wish we will find out what made Marie snap like that, what pushed her to touch all the mansion's inhabitans and why Xavier left her in the darkness? Sigh. This is powerful stuff. Thank you!

This story really has a great deal of potential and I'm sorry you have abandoned it. I'm going to follow it on the slight chance you might find your way back.

I'm so in love with this story! I wish it was finished. It's an amazing piece of work filled with so much details. I love that it's both an AU version of their first meeting, and yet it's not. I realized about 2 chapters ago that I would arrived at this point and it would be unfinished. I know it's very slim chance that you are still working on it, but I so hope you are. This is very will written and your characterization is awesome. So please continue this story!

Oh my God! I am completely gutted that this isn't completed, but extremely grateful that it ends on such a hopeful note. In my mind, Emma removes the filter from Logan's mind and he realises that he is in fact, completely and utterly head over heels for Marie in the least platonic sense possible. Marie's subconscious picks up on this somehow and she gets better a lot quicker, opening her mind up to Emma who then finds that Jean planted some sort of god-awful suggestion in Marie's mind too that made her lose herself like she did. Charles also got the same sort of treatment although in a less extreme manner. So, Emma can remove Jean's suggestion from Marie and she consequently wakes up. Her and Logan basically live happily ever after from there on out. I would also like to naively believe that Eric simply builds a nice home for mutants, and the world starts to accept them and everything is hunky dory. Somehow Jean is taken out of the equation too. Charles and the x-men go back to saving the world and being completely lovely people but Eric never attacks again since the world has accepted mutants. Although Marie and Logan have found a home on the island and the mansion is too full of bad memories and people they'd find hard to really trust again.
So there we go. Like anyone else cares about my imagined ending, but it makes me feel better to get it all out in words, like it actually does exist so i can be truly happy for their wonderful lives.

I really did love this story. I was worried at first that i couldn't take it, it's so intense and angsty and just sad. I'm proud to say it took me until chapter 6 to cry though and fortunately that's about when it started to get more hopeful too. I really liked the being able to observe Marie's mental adventures, that was such fun and a nice reprieve from the sadness. Not that i didn't love the sadness, it made for a great story, it was just you know, sad. But this was all very well thought out and excellently constructed, i really felt all those emotions.
Basically my point is, this was a really great story and i loved getting to read it even if it was never completed. It was a pleasure to get to experience so if you ever read this lovely Author, thanks so much, i loved it!

We all miss this story! Please come back!