Reviews for Making up for it |
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SazHearT chapter 1 . 5/27/2019 That was sweet |
Paz chapter 1 . 8/26/2016 Amazing |
daisy thiel chapter 1 . 7/17/2014 More |
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 10/14/2011 Great story! I really enjoyed it! |
Abi117 chapter 1 . 10/4/2009 Wow! I just loved it. Good job! :) |
goldcn chapter 1 . 8/10/2009 WOW! LUVED IT!D Totally awesome! Can't beleived she repaid him like though..., it was AWESOME!D |
ambroserollinsgirl chapter 1 . 7/22/2009 8D |
Pharies chapter 1 . 7/15/2009 I wish that they weren't related. But...at the same time it helps with stories, now doesn't it? lol You did a great job. ~Tori |
iloveme5895 chapter 1 . 5/4/2009 Hot Love it *~ashley~* |
Mondler4EvEr chapter 1 . 3/13/2009 I read about half of this before reviewing. I love the couple and the plot is good, but the way it was written kind of hindered the "good-ness" of the story. You didn't capitalize in the appropriate spots. You didn't put periods where there obvilously needs to be one. There were too many comma splices. Also, you switched up your tenses too many times. It all made the story difficult to read. So to help you out, I have taken the liberty of editing the story for you to repost. I'm not trying to sound mean, but I'm just saying these things so that you can be the best writer that you can be. If you would like to have the edited the version of your story then I will email it to you. But, I am sending you a list of ways to say the word "said." It's a great resource sheet that I use a lot to subsitute other words in for "said." I have been writing on this site for almost 5 years, so it's not like I'm inexperienced and have no clue what I'm talking about. I hope you take my advice, because it won't only make you a better writer, but it will get you more reviews and hopefully a little fan base. Those are always nice. :) April/Mondler4EvEr |