So, it is immature of her to be uncomfortable with the fact that Jasper lives with someone he used to have sex with? That is completely unreasonable! Her feelings are her feelings! Instead of acting like an authoritative jerk, Jasper should be reassuring her! And J acting like living with the mind-rapist Edward is no big deal? There is no way I would ever choose to live with him either. Why is Bella being such a pushover? You wrote her as strong at the beginning and now she is being submissive. No wonder he starts keeping things from her in later chapters and acting like he knows better. The story is good, but Bella backing down is very disappointing.

10 years After your Last update where you wrote „there will be ohne More chapter and maybe an Epiloge“ is still no update

Is there a chance that you wrote it but forgot to update it?

Hmm... unlikely... but I still believe in miracles ... at least once in a while

I really Liked your story and would like to thank you for all the work you put in it.

Great first chapter. Keep up the good work.

No fucking way would they go weeks with out having sex once she’s turned. They’re freaking mates.

It’s nice that they care and they’re protective but someone needs to put jasper and Carlisle back in their place. If she wants to go she damn sure is allowed to go. She doesn’t need “to pout” or “beg” thats so ridiculously inappropriate, she is a grown ass women who can make her own choices.

Jesus fuck I didn’t realize she was dating Edward. There’s no fucking way Jasper would ever be this much of a prude. God damn no.

Yup and here’s the downfall of the Cullen’s legit every single time. The girl just wants to be a damn vampire, let her already.

Oh hellllllll no if any man. No any person told me where I could and could not go I would drop their ass so quick and tell them where to shove it.

Again I really like your story, I’m just reacting to the dialogue here: but come fucking on jasper god damn you are not her father, yes you care about her and want to make sure she’s safe but this is ridiculous. Bella, no no one, should ever have to “ask permission” to go out with other people if they are a responsible adult. No one should have to be afraid of what their partner says or how they may punish them. Wtf this is seriously some sick ass backwards stuff. God damn she’s an individual she has her own freakin rights.

Okay rant over, like I said: I like your story

What the literally fuck. Just fucking kill this guy. I swear to god the Cullen’s are the saddest excuse for vampires, every story I read just continues to confirm that. (Great story tho btw)

Where are Peter and Char when you need them, obviously this guy is a problem just have them kill him come on Cullen’s think a little ️

I’m sad because I know you want this to be a Cullen story and I have no doubts the rest will be great, but it’s difficult to read that your just taking her away from Peter and Char so easily

Do you plan on continuing this story? It would be a shame to leave it unfinished. It is such a good one too and especially since we finally get to see vampire Bella. Please update soon!

Please update...

Oh, this was wonderful. I can’t help but hope you do the last two chapters someday, but even if this is all, it’s been an absolute pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing!