Awww!

just like sailor moon

Good story, a worthwhile read :)

very cute

Too cute for words ;;3;;

Haha. Brilliant! A drunken SEVENTEEN YEAR OLD Ahiru, and completely sober, um, maybe twenty year old Fakir? Ah...poor Fakir and the thoughts that must be going through his head at the intoxicated, naive Ahiru. Great story!

Awwwww haha u really should continue !

I should say I LOVED THIS STORY I don't know why people don't do more then one chapter for these guys but the one who wrote this story The ending was absolutly adorable but she was drunk... make a whole story of how she is in her new life and how they realize feelings and obviously she is happy for Rue so she has to get over Mytho sooner or later. I loved the story your subtles in romance was perfect it was slight in a way but also out spoken and not at all flashy I loved it Raving Reviews I want more of it IT was SO cute. So since she was intoxicated you should continue with a hangover going back to dancing helping Rue with a child or something in the castle falling in love oh dreammy sry

Aww, this was really cute. I love Fakir getting all nervous and flustered. Really good job!

nice XD

AW! *SQUEALS* That. Was. ADORABLE! *squeals some more* And they were so close to kissing! So, so close! The way you described it was amazing, how Ahiru swept her hand down her chest with Fakir's eyes unable to not follow... and how his mind was swimming with... yeah. lmao! :D

And a drunk Ahiru! Ohmygosh, for some reason, I can totally imagine that! This story was AMAZING. :) I could imagine every single scene perfectly! I love it! Totally faving. :) :)

that was wonderful! like a real author! i want it to continue though... can you? could you? would you...? continue?

I think you should continue this story because it could just be soo adorable and wonderful with love!

Your writing is extraordinary so please consider continuing

Aw... that was just plain adorable! Fakir was such a gentleman.

That was awesome. Drunk Ahiru is great. :)