what the hell is this...I mean Naruto and Moka just met and they are already kissing...

I had to stop about 1/5 in the first chapter. Your need to work on your writing skill. There is a lot of wrong information at the start. How did he master the last form if it is so large.

My fkin brain hurts after reading this lol

Well, I must say this was quite confusing when exactly was this set because shouldn't Mikoto Uchiha be ya know dead, and Naruto's kind of OOC here but whatever still pretty good

Pls update

Great I love it
When will we continue?
When Moka (Ura) gets pregnant with Naruto? When does he marry with? Yeah he also shares with Kurenai hehehe when Kurenai falls pregnant again?

Great story please continue it

I should note this for anyone who wants to read this story: You guys can read it if u want im not telling you u cant or anything but warning right here: Be prepared for tons of grammar mistakes and confusion. Although this story seems interesting, the grammar mistakes in this story along with a few other things killed it for me. But thats just me. If you can handle all that then go ahead and read.

Can I say that I am extremely confused right now? Tons of grammar mistakes, The fact Naruto fought in a war doesn't make sense at all as the only war he fought in was the Fourth Great Shinobi War but that happened AFTER he gained the respect of his village. Also, Naruto would have called Kurama by his name due to their bond that was formed during the war. Also, as for the getting Sasuke back mission or whatever, I thought this to be either during his fight with Sasuke in Orochimaru's hideout or kage summit. That's another thing, you should have said the name of the place of the battle. My guess was the Valley of the End at first but then that doesn't fit in due to Naruto's age and that battle happened when him and Sasuke were 13-14. Also, two days of knowing her yet there relationship has already developed to the point of having sex? Yeah, not believable. At least use time skips like further a week or maybe months. Another problem I have is although Naruto is inexperienced in combat, his raw power should make up for that if he was going to be the king of the demons. Yeah, I get that without experience in combat your like a rabbit in front of a tiger but still he should be able to stand equally in combat with them considering he is the KING of demons! Another problem. From what I have seen so far, you said Naruto was inexperienced jn combat but later on said he has killed lots of people and even participated in a war. Seriously, what the hell? He should be quite experienced in combat if he went through that. This made no sense to me at all. I'm going to reread this after I do my review to make sure if I read it correctly and if I didn't, I'll say this right now that I am sorry. Another thing I am going to say is how come Mizore love for Tsukune dropped just like that? She only met Naruto for like what an hour and the love she felt for Tsukune was gone just like that? While I admit Naruto is considered handsome in most stories, it isn't to the point of where a Girl who already loves someone else meets Naruto for an hour and completely lost interest for the other guy that she apparently loves. Anyways, that's all I am going to say. From what I read this does seem a bit interesting but you seriously need to fix these mistakes as it just ruined everything for me in my opinion.

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I'm really sorry if English is your second language but if its not then I have to say that this is really shitty writing.

Really good hope you update soon

My head actually hurt from how stupid this fucking story is and if you're gonna write a story learn how to actually write correctly not this shit that's all butchered and shit.

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