Yeah Rose didn't completely lose the vortex when he took it out. I wish that she had remembered, maybe events could have been changed. It's sad that she knew she would lose the Doctor for a bit, but she also knew they would reunite. When it was time.

Lovely, this has always been my unofficial head canon. Rose knew exactly what she was doing :)

Makes sense that she would see and do more.

Another great piece. I've already read The Journey Continues, and you are the first author who actually has my support behind the MetaCrisis Doctor. It was really cute, but without the Tardis there is only so much they can do. I enjoyed but want to get back to our favorite Time Lord. :)

sigh

beautifull. powerful work well done

Oh yes please! I would love to know how this fits into the rest of the time sceme.. especially since she knows she will never be with the "doctor" again and how she fits her actions actions into the rest of the scheme! Please add at least one more

AH!

hehhehehehehehehhehe

*goes insane*

goodgoodgoodgoodgood

Oh yes! Write more, please!

This is a good idea, I like how it explains the events of PotW better. It certainly makes more sense than the whole 'she did it because she didn't know what she was doing' idea. Well done!

~AzureFalls

wow...that fits everything perfectly.