Reviews for Treading Water
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19
Great Writing, but I just cannot take the bitter and hate feeling towards this bella. Oh, I get mad just by thinking about her. Sorry.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2017
I'm wondering to myself! Why the fuck does it matter that she knows he is with Jessica? She have no right to snap or complain about shit when she is about to move on marry and fight for jake with leah despite the fact he fucked her close friend. Edward is always wrote out stupid in fiction, he always weak when it comes to bella but if Edward leave or do anything wrong she makes him bag like a dog to him back! Femnist at its finest. yall women suck in creating good or bad men characters leave story telling to men like everything else we make better story telling without sounding or being sexist!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2017
Once again JK the bitch opens her stinky mouth! To complaine about what Edward is doing is wrong, but ignore the fact Bella married Jake and its ok? Bitch get your bitter ass off of E\B Fanfics and go watch one where she is paired with someone else then its planty of those here! Why waste your time reading a fic that ends with them being together when it only pisses you the fuck off? I bet you like etra old and never had a real man care for you with an attitude like that. SMMFH! Stay the fuck off of thier fanfiction or keep your fucking bitter angry ass thoughts to yourself because we are tired of it! Dammit.
Lore562 chapter 20 . 11/9/2016
I would love if you continue the story is really good
Comrade'sRoza chapter 20 . 8/5/2015
Amazing fic! Could you please update... please please please?
jk chapter 2 . 5/15/2015
HAHAHAHAHAHA if he likes Jessica std staney so much he can fucking have her...in my eyes its too late anyway hes "had" her so now hes toooooo gross and used for bella
jk chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
I don't hate bella I hate Edward...he gets drunk chicks from the bar all th time and JESSICA STANLEY are you fucking kidding...that's so gross I cant even...oh god I just puked in my mouth...and you want bella back with this nasty prick? hes nothing but a used up whore!
pauleen chapter 19 . 8/6/2013
That wad intense. But these two really need a heart to heart before others get hurt or they may end up hurt themselves.
pauleen chapter 16 . 8/4/2013
wow, Jessica is crazy. What is Edward doing even attempting any relationship with her? She could become suicidal or homicidal.
pauleen chapter 12 . 8/3/2013
I lobe how thos chapter went. Funny most of it.
pauleen chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Man this angst almighty. Im Loving it though. Bella is pissing me off with her trying to all, I don't love you i love Jake. At least Edward tried to make a mends and suck up his pride.

Please finish the story if it is possible. This is really good.
brina328 chapter 19 . 7/16/2013
Please update sooooon. Love this story
Edwardzlifeline chapter 20 . 5/17/2013
Hmmm...
EdwardLova chapter 13 . 5/17/2013
I like your story, but I have to say. It's slow as f**k! And yet I can't stop reading it :)
NameNoThanks chapter 4 . 2/25/2013
Is she gets on that plane I will die.
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