I don't comment on fanfiction, ever. I've been reading stories on this website for half of my life, and can count all the comments I've ever made on one hand and have fingers left over. But then you went and said "Audrey Hepburn eyes" and I couldn't help myself. No one even knows who she is anymore. I adore her. and this story. and you. Just splendid.

This story is amazing, and ignited my desire to discover more music! I feel like you know everything. The way you describe the music and the characters' performances is incredible. I felt like I could see everything unfolding as if I was there.
I also loved Bella's transformation; her timidness reminded me of Mazzy Star's Hope Sandoval at first, shyly singing "Fade Into You". It was incredible to see (or rather, read about) Bella blossoming before my eyes as a performer. I want to be just like this fictional character, haha.
You're really an amazing writer!

I really liked this first chapter and the poems they were chating. I think I will gonna like this history.

This is for the next chapter.

If it's an all night thing
Nobody is gonna make it end
And if it don't begin
Don't worry that I'll take offense
And if it's an all night thing
And we fall like a tear falling to the ground
I'll never come around
And you'll never hear a word from me
If it's an all night thing

These are my boys. I want to go back and look at my old reviews.

Chocolate chip

All my dead cats' tags: Simpson, Mike, Ben and Lula.
I have to get tags for Pi and Echo...just in case.
Also, a whistle and a small flashlight.

"omg, your eyes..." while we were making out.

"Stuttering, cold and damp
Steal the warm wind tired friend
Times are gone for honest men
And sometimes far too long for snakes
In my shoes, a walking sleep
And my youth I pray to keep
Heaven sent hell away
No one sings like you anymore..."

Very enjoyable, could be another "You've Got Mail" but please without Stewart and Pattinson.

Boy, do I love your writing style! The cadence of your prose and poetry throughout this work is just... soothing. It feels like when you sit down to read your favorite author’s new book, and you don’t know what they’ve written, but the way that it’s written is like coming home. It takes a lot for me to feel at home with someone else’s writing! Loved the rest of the work as well, of course. The characterization, the frustration of Edward and Bella’s inability to communicate with each other—it all kept me reading!

henny and coke on the rocks mmmm

CHILLS!

just started reading for the first time, so excited

Will we ever see tropic of Gemini?

Thanks for writing this wonderful story!

Now I understand "Sex & Rock & Roll". Great depth of characters, rich in poetry and prose.
One of my top 5 favorites.