Well, interesting and enjoyable. Somewhat hard to follow in places, but you managed to bring it together and make it make sense.

Catherine! Awesome!

Enjoyed this immensely. Your narrative voices are great - distinct and authentic.

I'm dying to know who the blonde chick is who rescued Faith at Willy's. Does she make an appearance in any of your other Backstage stories? I half wondered if she was Cordelia as an off-the-grid vigilante.

OMG! I totally just fell in love with this story! It didn't make sense at first but now I can't stop reading it, and I am so tired but I have to read another chapter...so I'm gonna go read the next one!

I really loved this story. Your characterizations are so wonderful and everything makes sense. Please keep it up. Really great work.

-ruby

It seemed to me that you tried to find the strangest ships in your story, and build the action over that. But again are you a good enough writer to pull it off. Many reader will have a problem with the story, because there are non of the favourite ships, and I think many fanfic readers read fanfic out from an wish to read about a particularly ship (There are to bloody many b/s fanfic) or a special character (ahem Xander or Anya). Wesley and vamp Harmony is weird, in a good way, and I will not tell about the ship is in Xander, just it is weirder and strangely enough there are in the canon some small hints that it could be possible. The ending was a little to much deus ex machine to me, but perhaps I did not read carefully enough. Bye the way I loved your POW from Harmony.

I can't believe there's only one other review for this story, considering how good an alternate universe fanfic this is. Well crafted, characterization is dead-on, and both plot and action are intriguing, with no lulls. Even the exposition is handled smoothly enough to provoke curiosity instead of boredom.

You should really flesh out some of the back stories... I'd like to see more of Wesley-with-a-pair stopping the Ascension.

Great job! :)

Pity-you seem like a fantastic writer, but I must say that I think the plot of this story is jsut ridiculous. I hope you find something to write that suits you, and then you will be better off.