I'm not so sure if you might be surprised or not but stauffenberg is my great great uncle so your kind of getting two munits with a . Btw, I loved your fanfic it was described exactly like the movie.

A good story, well written

Heys...

Your story on Stauffenberg's last moments is great. I wrote a story - 13 page all in all - about Stauffenberg and Tresckow too. But I hadn't publish it here in yet...

AWESOME I LOVED THE MOVIE, this story was great! I almost cried!

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you want my opinion?

I REALLY...

LOVED IT!

it made me nearly cry ... X(

tom cruise REALLY made the movie worthwhile, and i really like this one!

Whoa. That's what I said after reading this... WHOA. So beautifully written! My heart strings were tugged when Stauffenberg asked the doctor to save a place in history for him. He was such a brave man; I have a lot of respect and admiration for him! Your work is wonderful! Thank you!

It is very well written. I especially liked the part when Nadia and Stauffenberg are having the conversation on who actually governs one's mind. You should try to continue on this.

Interesting ...

I like it :)

First off, I like the idea of this. It doesn't really work in the context of the film, but nonetheless I think it's interesting and fairly well done.

I have two things that I feel compelled to point out:

'Nazi orientated' isn't the best way to say that the Nazi way of thinking. I'm thinking "That's the answer required of you." would be better. But that's just me.

Also, her last name strikes me as rather close to the Jewish tradition. Which makes me wonder why she's sympathetic to the Nazis.

All in all though, this was enjoyable, and I'm glad you posted it.

It is a bit choppy, but it's interesting. Also, for this one, I couldn't really picture where they were. Try working on that.