WHDID PETER PAN HAVE TO DIE ?

I love this story! It's so good! This is how peter pan should've ended

OMG THIS IS AMAZNG 3

I love how you wrote the story but, I don't think Peter Pan would ever leave NeverLand so easily.

That was beautiful :)

Best Peter Pan story I've read on this site. Just saying. It's very realistic - If Peter ever was to give up his childish immortality, it would have huge effects on the mortal body.

I found it very sweet, and although quite tragic for Jane, her ending was equally sweet and heart-warming.

Queenie xx

so sad and cute!

Ooh, that was so cute~! Hmm...I've been saying that a lot lately about these Peter Pan fanfics...:P But it was cute~! XD *sighs* And so the adventure begins once again...XD

ohh i loved it,u should do a sequael for jane/birch please! : )

This was a very interesting story ! I especially love your poems. Excellent :)

This was really excellent. I'm sad that Peter and Wendy died in the end, but I'm glad that Jane went to Neverland with Birch.

When i read this chapter I started to cry. Tears are still falling (hihi) Well, great story.

Enjoyed reading it.

I was watching the movie at the same time as I was reading this fic. It's so sad how Wendy and Peter end up together and have to die! I almost feel like crying now! But...you're a fabulous writer for making the story feel so real. Thank you! :)

wonderful! absolutely lovely! cant get over how beautiful the plot is!

Oh no! I'm glad Peter remembered but...BTW, I new on fanfiction, so what does cliff-hanger mean? Please? I honestly have no idea, and you probably think I'm an idiot but hey, what does it mean? Anyone?